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Array ( [sid] => 166029 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => OH WHEEL OF FORTUNE! [time] => 2011-04-26 05:17:16 [hometext] => An abstract poem about the stress the wheel of fortune goes through [bodytext] => Oh wheel of fortune you paved the way for our material wishes now you must be tired and weak
Our beautiful dreams were violently chased riding steadily on your forever rolling wheels
even on sunny and rainy days our hopes and visions never ceased
so why give up now when the peak of fortune we desire has not been reached?
how weary and frail you must be
how sick and old
so cruel we are to you for the worldly possesions we crave for slowly unfolds
for the long journey ahead you shall be laid to rest for the time being
i say this with tears and joy burning my soul
Oh wheel of fortune forever you remain ours to spin! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 214 [topic] => 73 [informant] => Majidlawal [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )
OH WHEEL OF FORTUNE!

Contributed by Majidlawal on Tuesday, 26th April 2011 @ 05:17:16 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract



Oh wheel of fortune you paved the way for our material wishes now you must be tired and weak
Our beautiful dreams were violently chased riding steadily on your forever rolling wheels
even on sunny and rainy days our hopes and visions never ceased
so why give up now when the peak of fortune we desire has not been reached?
how weary and frail you must be
how sick and old
so cruel we are to you for the worldly possesions we crave for slowly unfolds
for the long journey ahead you shall be laid to rest for the time being
i say this with tears and joy burning my soul
Oh wheel of fortune forever you remain ours to spin!



Copyright © Majidlawal ... [ 2011-04-26 05:17:16]
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Re: OH WHEEL OF FORTUNE! (User Rating: 1 )
by Banjosandwitch on Tuesday, 26th April 2011 @ 05:34:43 AM AEST
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abstract yes very lol


Re: OH WHEEL OF FORTUNE! (User Rating: 1 )
by Majidlawal on Tuesday, 26th April 2011 @ 05:58:33 AM AEST
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yeah..thatz what i enjoy doing best..writting abstract,war and death poems


Re: OH WHEEL OF FORTUNE! (User Rating: 1 )
by gypsymaddness on Wednesday, 27th April 2011 @ 01:30:55 AM AEST
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wow, this is different. makes me think, that we DO wish and dream alot.and makes me wonder; will the wheel of fortune really be tired and discouraged? man,great poem!


Re: OH WHEEL OF FORTUNE! (User Rating: 1 )
by Majidlawal on Wednesday, 27th April 2011 @ 09:04:18 AM AEST
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YEAH!!we all dream a whole lot..thanks man




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