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Array ( [sid] => 16590 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => dreams are left to rust [time] => 2003-04-27 09:35:00 [hometext] => i thought about this while listening to a song [bodytext] => "Dreams are left to rust "

Dreams are left to rust
When we become influenced by worldly lust.
The start of Eden is fun
But at downfall; defeat we start to shun
The precious joys of life-short live.
Lax insouciance we give.
Our temple's sanctuary turns to dust,
And our dreams are left to rust.
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dreams are left to rust

Contributed by stateofgray on Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



"Dreams are left to rust "

Dreams are left to rust
When we become influenced by worldly lust.
The start of Eden is fun
But at downfall; defeat we start to shun
The precious joys of life-short live.
Lax insouciance we give.
Our temple's sanctuary turns to dust,
And our dreams are left to rust.




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Re: dreams are left to rust (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 12:02:08 PM AEST
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this is great - i like it because its concise but with depth and some great imagery. keep writing, Kate x


Re: dreams are left to rust (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 12:15:27 PM AEST
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profound
Shari


Re: dreams are left to rust (User Rating: 1 )
by Daydreamer on Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 01:54:11 PM AEST
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WoW...I liked this poem alot..you did a good job..keep writting..~Day~


Re: dreams are left to rust (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 09:58:40 AM AEST
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Wow! This is really good. i really enjoyed it!

sleepless_siren


Re: dreams are left to rust (User Rating: 1 )
by Hades on Monday, 31st January 2011 @ 03:28:25 PM AEST
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Very profound, and very well written. Nicely done!




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