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Clear running streams
Soft falling raindrops
Surreal as it seems.

The warmth of a sunrise
The crash of the waves
On stoney laid beaches
With well hidden caves.

The slow wake each morning
The sweet smelling breeze
That tickles the trees trunks
And scatters the leaves.

The lingering eye lock
The shy touch of skin
the thrill of a first love
lets the magic begin.

The beauty of sunsets
The smoothness of wine
The mellowed out music
since beginning of time.

This is the wonder
of mystical ways
the tranquility moments
turns stresses away.

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Tranquility

Contributed by thistle_and_fern on Saturday, 16th April 2011 @ 05:35:05 PM in AEST
Topic: surreal

Misty topped mountains
Clear running streams
Soft falling raindrops
Surreal as it seems.

The warmth of a sunrise
The crash of the waves
On stoney laid beaches
With well hidden caves.

The slow wake each morning
The sweet smelling breeze
That tickles the trees trunks
And scatters the leaves.

The lingering eye lock
The shy touch of skin
the thrill of a first love
lets the magic begin.

The beauty of sunsets
The smoothness of wine
The mellowed out music
since beginning of time.

This is the wonder
of mystical ways
the tranquility moments
turns stresses away.

Copyright © thistle_and_fern ... [ 2011-04-16 17:35:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Tranquility (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 16th April 2011 @ 07:43:16 PM AEST
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A tranquility of awesome word picture.
blessings,
emy

Re: Tranquility (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 16th April 2011 @ 07:44:09 PM AEST
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Oh I love this....it flows like a gentle stream through an undulating landscape.... Nicely written...

Re: Tranquility (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 03:59:34 AM AEST
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DAMN! nice job capturing the very essence of tranquility. I feel calmer just reading this. :)

Re: Tranquility (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 10th June 2011 @ 02:06:19 PM AEST
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After a week that seemed to go on forever I now feel totally chilled and peaceful after reading this.
There was a lovely understated charm about this and you've captured serenity and calm so well.
No need to spend money on pampering myself now!!

Steve

Re: Tranquility (User Rating: 1 )
by JimKoz on Thursday, 12th December 2013 @ 12:58:23 AM AEST
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This is such a beautiful piece! Thanks for the lovely read, mate.
"The lingering eye lock
The shy touch of skin
the thrill of a first love
lets the magic begin.
The beauty of sunsets
The smoothness of wine
The mellowed out music
since beginning of time." -Capturing some of the best things in life upon these lines. :)

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