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Array ( [sid] => 165860 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Last Time [time] => 2011-04-13 19:12:24 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Taking a breath of fresh cool air
Steping outside in the spring
Riding a ride at the state fair
The beutiful things life can bring

Washing hands with water from the shore
Smelling the smoke from the fire
All the things life has in store
All the wishes and desires

Dancing in the arms of your true love
Sharing a drink of wine
Warm rain drops from the storm above
Memorizing your next line

As all good things they must come to an end
The last time you see blue skies
Sharing a story with a frind
The last time you close your eyes

Aaron D. Carman [comments] => 3 [counter] => 249 [topic] => 21 [informant] => crmnlilbruno [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

The Last Time

Contributed by crmnlilbruno on Wednesday, 13th April 2011 @ 07:12:24 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Taking a breath of fresh cool air
Steping outside in the spring
Riding a ride at the state fair
The beutiful things life can bring

Washing hands with water from the shore
Smelling the smoke from the fire
All the things life has in store
All the wishes and desires

Dancing in the arms of your true love
Sharing a drink of wine
Warm rain drops from the storm above
Memorizing your next line

As all good things they must come to an end
The last time you see blue skies
Sharing a story with a frind
The last time you close your eyes

Aaron D. Carman

Copyright © crmnlilbruno ... [ 2011-04-13 19:12:24]
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Re: The Last Time (User Rating: 1 )
by DanWhite on Wednesday, 13th April 2011 @ 07:20:06 PM AEST
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Really liked this one, lots to think about. Good writing.

Re: The Last Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 15th April 2011 @ 09:27:23 AM AEST
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makes you think. i like it

Re: The Last Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Robert_Edgar_Burns on Thursday, 29th December 2011 @ 10:26:24 PM AEST
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You know, there are two ways to look at this.
One way is bittersweet! The better way to
think of this subject matter would be to realize
that our last memories here instantly turn to
first memories of the eternal kind! May all your
memories though be only happy ones!
Blessings,
Robert Edgar Burns (Rob)

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