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Perched beasts free falling into stars

Their bloody hearts needing romance

An army of devotion cheated by love

Fiery eyes bombing the sky with pain

Cupid’s assassins firing on satellites

Slaying the heartbreakers one by one

Condemned to hunting the surgeon

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Emotions

Contributed by duff on Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 08:49:38 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Unified in a graceful slick they dive

Perched beasts free falling into stars

Their bloody hearts needing romance

An army of devotion cheated by love

Fiery eyes bombing the sky with pain

Cupid’s assassins firing on satellites

Slaying the heartbreakers one by one

Condemned to hunting the surgeon

Copyright Â© duff ... [ 2011-04-02 08:49:38]
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Re: Emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by UNORTHODOX on Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 10:31:18 AM AEST
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An Elaborate and well depicted passage
emotions are as complex, as this array of artistic depth before us
in only moments my mind was flooded by imagery,
metaphorically superb,awesome piece.

-UNORTHODOX

Re: Emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 10:44:23 AM AEST
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What a wonderfully different take strong empowered impassioned response building to the slaying, the want for revenge and then plummeting into the inevitable I love that last line
condemned to hunting the surgeon, you have so much life in your writing and you never fail to stir the soul.

Re: Emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by NightOwl61 on Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 01:24:24 PM AEST
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Quite a vivid, potent piece. Penned with a bit of fire. tfs

Re: Emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Sunday, 3rd April 2011 @ 02:01:45 AM AEST
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Very strong writing. Deep and highly emotive, this is a fine piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing.

Re: Emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Tuesday, 12th April 2011 @ 10:23:03 AM AEST
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Awesome write! 'Slaying the heartbreakers one by one' Love it!

ming

Re: Emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Saturday, 14th May 2011 @ 03:40:36 AM AEST
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"An army of devotion, cheated by love." I loved this line. It makes me think of when I have lost someone I am devoted to because they fall in love with another.

Re: Emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 11th April 2016 @ 08:34:19 PM AEST
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A army of devotion,love that line,
excellent flow
great poem......

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