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Array ( [sid] => 165538 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Eyes: (A Love, A Life, A Moment) [time] => 2011-03-29 14:40:15 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I have risen to defeat,
Awakened scorned by dreams,
And am broken by your eyes

With beauty you dispelled me
With grace you cast me out
With pity you expelled me

I will never understand
The great power of your eyes
I will never feel again
The emotion in those eyes
I will never forget the
bright wonders of your eyes

For within your lovely face
I found love in a moment
Despite newly broken heart

With beauty you dispelled me
With grace you cast me out
With pity you expelled me

A love, a life, a moment
Without time to stop and think
I awoke without her gaze

A love, a life, a moment
A torment for eternity
Now wasted on memory [comments] => 4 [counter] => 138 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Frillycakes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Eyes: (A Love, A Life, A Moment)

Contributed by Frillycakes on Tuesday, 29th March 2011 @ 02:40:15 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I have risen to defeat,
Awakened scorned by dreams,
And am broken by your eyes

With beauty you dispelled me
With grace you cast me out
With pity you expelled me

I will never understand
The great power of your eyes
I will never feel again
The emotion in those eyes
I will never forget the
bright wonders of your eyes

For within your lovely face
I found love in a moment
Despite newly broken heart

With beauty you dispelled me
With grace you cast me out
With pity you expelled me

A love, a life, a moment
Without time to stop and think
I awoke without her gaze

A love, a life, a moment
A torment for eternity
Now wasted on memory

Copyright © Frillycakes ... [ 2011-03-29 14:40:15]
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Re: Eyes: (A Love, A Life, A Moment) (User Rating: 1 )
by poeticjestix on Tuesday, 29th March 2011 @ 03:56:24 PM AEST
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the eyes have it

Re: Eyes: (A Love, A Life, A Moment) (User Rating: 1 )
by Frillycakes on Tuesday, 29th March 2011 @ 04:05:31 PM AEST
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Haha, yeah. ain't it amazing?

Re: Eyes: (A Love, A Life, A Moment) (User Rating: 1 )
by NightOwl61 on Tuesday, 29th March 2011 @ 09:19:14 PM AEST
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nifty little write. Wonderfully vivid, especially when one puts much weight in the view of another. You captured that well in your words here. I'm think the repetition of the lines: "With beauty you dispelled me
With grace you cast me out
With pity you expelled me " are unnecessary though. The poem would read right well without the repeat. Thanks for sharing.

Re: Eyes: (A Love, A Life, A Moment) (User Rating: 1 )
by huwbeauty on Wednesday, 30th March 2011 @ 02:26:28 AM AEST
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A moving and nicely written poem.I especially like the last verse.

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