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Array ( [sid] => 165521 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Rose with perfect bloom [time] => 2011-03-28 19:41:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => At the local diner
Baby, you're sitting across from me,
I just cant tell you enough,
You're more than just a heart beat.
You're the one wonder,
that gives me life
Who's to say,
that life doesn't get better than this.
Every time I see your face,
It's like finding the rose,
With the perfect bloom.
Tonight Feeling your skin
A martyr,
As it softly slips from my lips.
It brings invisible Tear drops,
Down my face.
I'm trying to touch the ground,
But I'm higher,
Than any wish that comes true.
Forever side by side,
Gazing into the midnight stars
We will create our dreams,
Sharing all of our secrets,
In this world.
Chilling to think,
Just how much I love you
nothing to lose, everything to gain
By being with you.
Baby I watch you fade into the darkness
Tomorrow can't come soon enough.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Recyclebin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

The Rose with perfect bloom

Contributed by Recyclebin on Monday, 28th March 2011 @ 07:41:01 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

At the local diner
Baby, you're sitting across from me,
I just cant tell you enough,
You're more than just a heart beat.
You're the one wonder,
that gives me life
Who's to say,
that life doesn't get better than this.
Every time I see your face,
It's like finding the rose,
With the perfect bloom.
Tonight Feeling your skin
A martyr,
As it softly slips from my lips.
It brings invisible Tear drops,
Down my face.
I'm trying to touch the ground,
But I'm higher,
Than any wish that comes true.
Forever side by side,
Gazing into the midnight stars
We will create our dreams,
Sharing all of our secrets,
In this world.
Chilling to think,
Just how much I love you
nothing to lose, everything to gain
By being with you.
Baby I watch you fade into the darkness
Tomorrow can't come soon enough.

Copyright © Recyclebin ... [ 2011-03-28 19:41:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Rose with perfect bloom (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 28th March 2011 @ 08:27:11 PM AEST
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Ah, now I see what u been up to.
It's great to see this beautiful write.
Welcome back, friend.
huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy

Re: The Rose with perfect bloom (User Rating: 1 )
by Harsh on Monday, 28th March 2011 @ 11:31:09 PM AEST
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Quite a descriptive write.

Awaiting more.

Re: The Rose with perfect bloom (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 29th March 2011 @ 12:44:36 PM AEST
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Yea I was gonna say that, we know what your doing lol.
Loved the write as always my friend.
have a good week

Michelle

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