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and count the minutes with no hope
to go and live the dream
and see your all go up in smoke
to see within the eyes
of your love a need to leave
to hide your heart away
too proud to put it on your sleeve
to try, but not enough
and despair when the sun is down
to move along and grope
disgust yourself when out round town
to watch the years go by
and carry on with no regard
to enjoy breaking hearts
and slowly bleed upon a shard
to finally look back
and see your heart,it's just intact
you ignored all the cracks
there's no way back. That is a fact. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 22 [informant] => poeticjestix [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

the shards of time

Contributed by poeticjestix on Sunday, 20th March 2011 @ 05:08:26 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

To be the losing team
and count the minutes with no hope
to go and live the dream
and see your all go up in smoke
to see within the eyes
of your love a need to leave
to hide your heart away
too proud to put it on your sleeve
to try, but not enough
and despair when the sun is down
to move along and grope
disgust yourself when out round town
to watch the years go by
and carry on with no regard
to enjoy breaking hearts
and slowly bleed upon a shard
to finally look back
and see your heart,it's just intact
you ignored all the cracks
there's no way back. That is a fact.

Copyright © poeticjestix ... [ 2011-03-20 17:08:26]
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Re: the shards of time (User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on Sunday, 20th March 2011 @ 07:59:04 PM AEST
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I love your flow! Especially loved:

"to see within the eyes
of your love a need to leave
to hide your heart away
too proud to put it on your sleeve"

That, my friend, was what I like to call: awesome poetry.

-Kara

Re: the shards of time (User Rating: 1 )
by wr on Tuesday, 22nd March 2011 @ 12:47:33 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this. Such a heartfelt poem.

Re: the shards of time (User Rating: 1 )
by CherryReadPoet on Saturday, 26th March 2011 @ 11:03:11 AM AEST
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Beautifully written :) love it

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