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That One, you know.
Contributed by
BrianTheonly
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Saturday, 19th March 2011 @ 10:11:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Softly glowing, Always showing.
Her simple, easy replies.
My Dilemma, My life, it towers in interest, compared to hers.
But they find her, the child, to be of positive concern.
Bright Child, why do you confuse the rest?
Why must you do this?
Am I the only? Do you confuse me too?
Make me a savior. Not Her!
I lay speechless in aw, I hate you just the same.
Your valid pep.
Springy step.
Torments every fiber.
Copyright ©
BrianTheonly
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2011-03-19 22:11:33] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: That One, you know.
(User Rating: 1 ) by deusdeira on
Sunday, 20th March 2011 @ 03:47:51 AM AEST (User
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sounds like someone is jealous :P don't worry, its much better after you get out of school. |
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Re: That One, you know.
(User Rating: 1 ) by allforyou on
Sunday, 20th March 2011 @ 08:07:33 PM AEST (User
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I loved this, especially:
"But they find her, the child, to be of positive concern.
Bright Child, why do you confuse the rest?
Why must you do this?
Am I the only? Do you confuse me too?
Make me a savior. Not Her!"
Wonderful.
-Kara |
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