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Array ( [sid] => 165287 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Violins of Violence [time] => 2011-03-15 11:29:49 [hometext] => Dedicated to a man who could only love an inanimate object. [bodytext] => You use your bow to play,
my heartstrings like a violin.
But the sound that protrudes,
from the hole is violent.

I'm the A-String, you're the D-string,
and our hearts, the G and E-strings.
You're my clandestine musician,
whose love's silent.

And on this path of empathy,
you are the pilot.
You're the one that I've made strides with,
despite the world's advisement.

Your complaisance is a cemetery,
whose sentiment has long been buried.
And now I hear you sing your hymn,
to nothing but your violin. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 276 [topic] => 22 [informant] => allforyou [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Violins of Violence

Contributed by allforyou on Tuesday, 15th March 2011 @ 11:29:49 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You use your bow to play,
my heartstrings like a violin.
But the sound that protrudes,
from the hole is violent.

I'm the A-String, you're the D-string,
and our hearts, the G and E-strings.
You're my clandestine musician,
whose love's silent.

And on this path of empathy,
you are the pilot.
You're the one that I've made strides with,
despite the world's advisement.

Your complaisance is a cemetery,
whose sentiment has long been buried.
And now I hear you sing your hymn,
to nothing but your violin.

Copyright © allforyou ... [ 2011-03-15 11:29:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Violins of Violence (User Rating: 1 )
by CommasCanSeperate on Tuesday, 15th March 2011 @ 01:47:21 PM AEST
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Amazing write. so different from anything else I've read!
I love how you use a heart and violin to contrast! Lovleyy!

Re: Violins of Violence (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 15th March 2011 @ 06:22:41 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking.
good job.
Big huggs, blessings,
emy

Re: Violins of Violence (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th March 2011 @ 11:03:22 PM AEST
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A very poetic and polite way of telling this person he's an idiot. Sounds like he doesn't deserve you or even a poem written this well. Nicely done.

Tim

Re: Violins of Violence (User Rating: 1 )
by JohnnyFallen on Monday, 21st October 2013 @ 02:49:14 AM AEST
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I like this one since I'm a music person and I also like how "violins" and "violence" are used in the same title even though they sound alike. To me it sounds like he loved a violin more than he did you. That's just the sound of it to me. cx

Anyway it's a good piece of work, keep writing. :)

-Johnny

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