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Array ( [sid] => 165236 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Things [time] => 2011-03-12 00:15:32 [hometext] => We all need some cheesy stuff now and then [bodytext] => Let me kiss your pretty brown eyes
Let me hold you for a while
Let me touch your cheeks
Let me feel all your needs
Live your dreams
Scare away all your nasty demons

Let me kiss you on the lips
Let me touch your sexy hips
Let my fingers run through your hair
Just after you had a shower
Hold you against me
Until i can't feel the towel
Your wet skin
The spark i need for my sad soul

I just want to sink into you
We become the same
Crush all your thorns with one mighty blow
Give you the most beautiful day

And
love you
forever
and
ever [comments] => 3 [counter] => 143 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Dirkj [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Things

Contributed by Dirkj on Saturday, 12th March 2011 @ 12:15:32 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Let me kiss your pretty brown eyes
Let me hold you for a while
Let me touch your cheeks
Let me feel all your needs
Live your dreams
Scare away all your nasty demons

Let me kiss you on the lips
Let me touch your sexy hips
Let my fingers run through your hair
Just after you had a shower
Hold you against me
Until i can't feel the towel
Your wet skin
The spark i need for my sad soul

I just want to sink into you
We become the same
Crush all your thorns with one mighty blow
Give you the most beautiful day

And
love you
forever
and
ever

Copyright © Dirkj ... [ 2011-03-12 00:15:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Things (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 12th March 2011 @ 01:11:05 AM AEST
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Cheesy or not it's beautiful.
Big huggs,
emy

Re: Things (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 12th March 2011 @ 01:30:40 AM AEST
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I like cheese. ... Oh and I like the poem too. Smile!

Smile!

Re: Things (User Rating: 1 )
by hacktastic on Saturday, 12th March 2011 @ 03:24:31 AM AEST
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"emy" gave you and your poem "big hugs." I guess that's what this does to the ladies!

Whom ever inspired this, I hope you read it to them. They will love it!

It is so heartfelt and honest in an uncluttered simplicity. I wish I had the though to do this! I'll have to borrow it as inspiration and write one of my own.

Nice work!

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