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Array ( [sid] => 165163 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Eternal love [time] => 2011-03-08 14:03:04 [hometext] => Love can be an amazing thing, yet we often let it go, we must feed it every day. I for one sit here alone now, remembering what it was. Will I ever love again? Only time will tell. [bodytext] => Blood rushing through my veins to my heart every heartbeat beats your name I think of you even in my sleep I hope you still do the same.
For I only long to be with you, grow with you I want you forever with me this i swear is true.
I only wish for you to smile, a smile that threatens the sun and the sky, the jealous jealous sky that illuminates me and you.
My frozen heart it begs to be warm, the warmth that only you can give, My beatufiul girl who could ever believe, that this world could offer us such
an internal ordeal. You and I, like two souls into one will prosper and grow in a deep and ever lasting glow. Take my hand and beleive that you and I are whats meant to be.
Who are we to alter the balance of the world, believing that even true love does not feed on hard work. A love so deep and unique,my darling I promise this is ours forever to keep. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Flex4life13 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Eternal love

Contributed by Flex4life13 on Tuesday, 8th March 2011 @ 02:03:04 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Blood rushing through my veins to my heart every heartbeat beats your name I think of you even in my sleep I hope you still do the same.
For I only long to be with you, grow with you I want you forever with me this i swear is true.
I only wish for you to smile, a smile that threatens the sun and the sky, the jealous jealous sky that illuminates me and you.
My frozen heart it begs to be warm, the warmth that only you can give, My beatufiul girl who could ever believe, that this world could offer us such
an internal ordeal. You and I, like two souls into one will prosper and grow in a deep and ever lasting glow. Take my hand and beleive that you and I are whats meant to be.
Who are we to alter the balance of the world, believing that even true love does not feed on hard work. A love so deep and unique,my darling I promise this is ours forever to keep.




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Re: Eternal love (User Rating: 1 )
by RachelSixx on Tuesday, 8th March 2011 @ 06:56:19 PM AEST
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beautifully written, i love every word.


Re: Eternal love (User Rating: 1 )
by CherryReadPoet on Tuesday, 8th March 2011 @ 08:22:00 PM AEST
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I just have to say that I've read a few of your other poems and honestly, I find yours some of the best :) this one is definately one of my favorites :) my favorite line, "I only wish you to smile, a smile hat threatens the sun and the sky, the jealous, jealous sky that illuminates me and you." I love it :)


Re: Eternal love (User Rating: 1 )
by Mando on Thursday, 10th March 2011 @ 10:11:15 AM AEST
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Every body needs to be loved or have loved itnseems that you put alot of love in this poem




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