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amidst the rain
the faerie does his best
to swallow the pain
the dragon sets aglow
tattered branches of old
the gargoyle feigns a smile
for memories turned cold
the elf just cries
crystal tears of sadness
the unicorn is bewildered
by the lack of gladness
the leprechaun jumps
but there is no joy
the sprite still flies
yet, without her toy
the pegasus just stands
staring at sick clouds
the gnome cannot see
as the darkness abounds

what, pray tell
has happened here?
imagination faded
with one small tear

would you, could you
heal this place?
it takes just one wish
from one smiling face

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mythical demise

Contributed by LadyDama on Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

the angel weeps softly
amidst the rain
the faerie does his best
to swallow the pain
the dragon sets aglow
tattered branches of old
the gargoyle feigns a smile
for memories turned cold
the elf just cries
crystal tears of sadness
the unicorn is bewildered
by the lack of gladness
the leprechaun jumps
but there is no joy
the sprite still flies
yet, without her toy
the pegasus just stands
staring at sick clouds
the gnome cannot see
as the darkness abounds

what, pray tell
has happened here?
imagination faded
with one small tear

would you, could you
heal this place?
it takes just one wish
from one smiling face

Copyright © LadyDama ... [ 2003-04-24 20:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: mythical demise (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 08:37:06 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this magical piece.
Michelle

Re: mythical demise (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 08:43:08 PM AEST
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very imaginitive ... good write
Shari

Re: mythical demise (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 03:11:12 AM AEST
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After a long time with elves and gnomes..magical appearance.. ty. venkat

Re: mythical demise (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 06:14:22 AM AEST
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I wish that your mythical place comes alive again with a smile :)))) Lovely poem - beautiful images ... Jan

Re: mythical demise (User Rating: 1 )
by TheSpiritx on Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 06:49:44 PM AEST
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Returning once again
I see another writing
Glad to hear your words
That often leave me smiling

I step in the door and look around
Taking in the sight
And then I see your poetry
And it makes my world so bright

You write a magical piece
Filled with mythical beasts and creatures
Your work is filled with precious thoughts
And many small, fine features

I was pleased to lay my eyes
Upon this nifty piece
And hope down in my heart
That your work shall never cease.

Thanks for posting, it was a good one :)

TS

Re: mythical demise (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 04:58:01 PM AEST
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this is really neat and i love it!! i hope they all are happy soon though! more please, hugs nessa

Re: mythical demise (User Rating: 1 )
by Chuckx on Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 10:31:55 AM AEST
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I enjoyed your list of fantastic creatures. It reminded me of the healing powers I have in a smile.

I place my smile
on unicorns
to lift, once saddened,
unadorned
inherent beauty
with the green of life:
this sage's duty

If not
I fear your poem
unheeded
leaving the lot to chance
mistreated
would fall; the demise of poetry
along with my remarks
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