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[aid] => mick
[title] => The Presence
[time] => 2011-03-06 22:44:23
[hometext] => I wrote this poem so people know no matter what, even if they are alone there is always somebody there next to you that cares even if it is a Presence
[bodytext] => I'm sitting here on this warm sunny day, The sky is beautiful the birds are chirping away. I feel myself in a happy daze, I watch the trees and bushes sway. I think to myself what could be more beautiful than this, then I saw my reflection and a presence insisted this. Dont ever doubt what you have never tried, and always carry yourself with a ton of pride. Your beautiful inside and out keep your strength and wash away the doubt. As I listened my face felt so bare and I felt the touch of him through the wind going through my hair. I got chills but I insisted to stay I felt the embrace of something that warm sunny day. it grabbed my hand and put it to my heart, then it whispered this is where your happiness will start. My mouth dropped in disbelief as I could feel everyone stare, then I looked behind me and no one was there. I closed my eyes and my mood was fair, once again I felt it with the wind going through the hair. As my eyes opened I sensed someone was again there, only to find it was a presence showing me it cared! By Steffanie M Jensen [comments] => 4 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 48 [informant] => sjensen91 [notes] => Please do not comment on your own work. Your comment on this poem has been removed. You can send someone a private message if you wish to thank them. Thank you. Moderator_18 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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