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Array ( [sid] => 165135 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dellusions [time] => 2011-03-06 22:39:46 [hometext] => My poem centers on things that appear to be what they are not [bodytext] => Dillusions

in reality everyone knows what it is they need
sometimes they are blinded by selfishness and greed.
A simple choice is all it will take,
but the word choice is always a fake.
Everyone knows what it is they desire,
sometimes they will challenge themselfs and light the wonderful on fire.
its a reassurance that will help you sleep
but in reality you always knows what or who you are going to keep.
No matter what your heart knows who will be
sometimes you need obsticals to figure out thee.
Sometimes you neglect the ones you love and adore
for the thrill of excitment of something that appears to be more.
there are those dillusions that make you think they are real
one simple mistake with those will show you how you really feel.
In some cases thats needed and taken as a blessing
and that is the beginning of lifes lesson.
you may have had a crystal and put that aside for a stone,
then you realized with out the crystal you were really alone.
The rock made you feel on top for a short time,
but after having the stone you realized the crystal has more shine.
So you then take the stone and leave it behind.
by having the crystal happiness is what you would find.
The crystal gave you something the stone could not,
the stone was oh wait we seem to have forgot.
The stone was a stone and nothing more,
the crystal is beauty you chose to keep forever more.
Some people make them appear to be more than they are,
buy keeping those intruders you wont get far.
Learn from this mistakes you once thought you had to choose
or the beauty of the crystal you will forever loose.

By: Steffanie M Jensen
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Dellusions

Contributed by sjensen91 on Sunday, 6th March 2011 @ 10:39:46 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Dillusions

in reality everyone knows what it is they need
sometimes they are blinded by selfishness and greed.
A simple choice is all it will take,
but the word choice is always a fake.
Everyone knows what it is they desire,
sometimes they will challenge themselfs and light the wonderful on fire.
its a reassurance that will help you sleep
but in reality you always knows what or who you are going to keep.
No matter what your heart knows who will be
sometimes you need obsticals to figure out thee.
Sometimes you neglect the ones you love and adore
for the thrill of excitment of something that appears to be more.
there are those dillusions that make you think they are real
one simple mistake with those will show you how you really feel.
In some cases thats needed and taken as a blessing
and that is the beginning of lifes lesson.
you may have had a crystal and put that aside for a stone,
then you realized with out the crystal you were really alone.
The rock made you feel on top for a short time,
but after having the stone you realized the crystal has more shine.
So you then take the stone and leave it behind.
by having the crystal happiness is what you would find.
The crystal gave you something the stone could not,
the stone was oh wait we seem to have forgot.
The stone was a stone and nothing more,
the crystal is beauty you chose to keep forever more.
Some people make them appear to be more than they are,
buy keeping those intruders you wont get far.
Learn from this mistakes you once thought you had to choose
or the beauty of the crystal you will forever loose.

By: Steffanie M Jensen

Copyright © sjensen91 ... [ 2011-03-06 22:39:46]
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Re: Dellusions (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 6th March 2011 @ 11:51:02 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Another awesome write.
Blessings,
emy

Re: Dellusions (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Tuesday, 8th March 2011 @ 01:00:58 PM AEST
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It is hard to know when you have a crystal until you have lost it, especially for people who don't appreciate things like they should.

Re: Dellusions (User Rating: 1 )
by Mando on Friday, 11th March 2011 @ 08:43:11 AM AEST
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now this is so good there are words i want to use to discribe it but can't , so any ways keep up the good work

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