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limbs outstretched
tulip touching

pale & simple
wrists upturned

bruised & biased
I am un. . .

able to express

but shed gently
this scrutiny. . . because

because

your language is too painful
for my understanding

is scribbling
13 questions

whose answers
are all the same. . .

I am sick [comments] => 6 [counter] => 391 [topic] => 64 [informant] => elle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )

I'll write for you tomorrow. . .

Contributed by elle on Saturday, 26th February 2011 @ 08:58:21 AM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

I'll write for you tomorrow. . .

limbs outstretched
tulip touching

pale & simple
wrists upturned

bruised & biased
I am un. . .

able to express

but shed gently
this scrutiny. . . because

because

your language is too painful
for my understanding

is scribbling
13 questions

whose answers
are all the same. . .

I am sick

Copyright © elle ... [ 2011-02-26 08:58:21]
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Re: I'll write for you tomorrow. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 26th February 2011 @ 10:43:26 PM AEST
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Quite honestly, I haven't a clue (or maybe a tad) what you're writing about but I just know a very sad feeling comes over me as I read it and as always, your imagery and use of words is damn inspiring.

It is now tomorrow...

Re: I'll write for you tomorrow. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Breezy on Sunday, 27th February 2011 @ 04:29:35 AM AEST
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elle, the emotions your poetry conjures are unbelievable.
It's truly amazing, how you are able to take the hand of the
deepest feelings and force them into the light. Your writing
is honest and wonderfully real. Well done, poet. Well done.

~ Breezy

Re: I'll write for you tomorrow. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by lonelyguy92 on Monday, 28th February 2011 @ 12:06:52 PM AEST
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A very nice poem

Re: I'll write for you tomorrow. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by poeticjestix on Monday, 28th February 2011 @ 12:32:55 PM AEST
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intriguing. Like a half burnt scroll. There's something there but it's hidden too deep and I've lost my spade.

Re: I'll write for you tomorrow. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by JAlexandra on Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 08:41:36 PM AEST
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Clever! enjoyed reading

Re: I'll write for you tomorrow. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Frillycakes on Saturday, 26th March 2011 @ 06:51:30 AM AEST
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This is why enjoy poetry!

Frillycakes

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