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Array ( [sid] => 164985 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Are [time] => 2011-02-26 00:59:43 [hometext] => The past couple of weeks I have been talking to this girl in my 3D design class in college and I finally asked her on a date. We went out and had a great time. Is this poem too strong to give after a first date, and does it all make clear enough sense? [bodytext] => You are
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A smile so impeccable it decimates the universe
An irresistible laugh that contradicts reality
A personality that shapes surrounding scenery
An undeniable essence that purges every mind
…
A mysterious girl whose presence precedes all else
An evoking gaze that traps all souls
A placid beauty encompassing infinite space
An unforgettable touch that mimics perfection
…
A scholar of art
An interpreter of designs
A painter of classics
An opinion that defines
…
A flower before me that I want to travel
An endless passion that can guide
A history that I would like to unravel
An inducing tonic with which I side
…
You are
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You Are

Contributed by coaaal on Saturday, 26th February 2011 @ 12:59:43 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You are
…
A smile so impeccable it decimates the universe
An irresistible laugh that contradicts reality
A personality that shapes surrounding scenery
An undeniable essence that purges every mind
…
A mysterious girl whose presence precedes all else
An evoking gaze that traps all souls
A placid beauty encompassing infinite space
An unforgettable touch that mimics perfection
…
A scholar of art
An interpreter of designs
A painter of classics
An opinion that defines
…
A flower before me that I want to travel
An endless passion that can guide
A history that I would like to unravel
An inducing tonic with which I side
…
You are

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Re: You Are (User Rating: 1 )
by Dirkj on Saturday, 26th February 2011 @ 01:08:47 AM AEST
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hmmm your question is not a simple one, depends on her personality. if she's the type of person that likes to be pampered, i'd say go for it, but if she's the strong independent type, wait a bit, nice poem though

Re: You Are (User Rating: 1 )
by coaaal on Saturday, 26th February 2011 @ 03:56:17 AM AEST
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Appreciate the heads up man, sometimes it's impossible for me to read females... so far she seems to be in between the pampered and strong type.

Re: You Are (User Rating: 1 )
by coaaal on Sunday, 27th February 2011 @ 06:28:48 AM AEST
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Hey all, so i asked this girl if i could call her once 2 days later rolled around, and she said she was drinking then going to a hot tub. I feel that after such an awesome 1st date that she would want to talk... how should i read this, or am I reading into this too much? I know this isn't a dating etiquette website, but i feel that this is the right place to ask.

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