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Array ( [sid] => 164901 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => End of a Familiar Romance [time] => 2011-02-21 06:48:01 [hometext] => Looking back at a past relationship leaves me wondering [bodytext] => I apologize if it's too short, I've recently been writing poems in my cell phone's "notes" function, so I don't forget good pieces or lines that come to me, especially at work.

What is love?
Can we be sure?
It's a word without
any single meaning
and expressed in or by
the context of our
very own emotions.
For me it isn't known
but it's felt. I feel it
every time you look
at me, and all I can do
is smile out of happiness.
I feel it as I hold you
While you slowly drift away
and start to fall asleep.
I felt it when we had played
hard to get, even though
we had both been gotten.
I felt it when we looked
at the stars, and picked
one to be only ours.
One that was unique
(just like you).
I felt it when we kissed
and when we made love
and I felt still...
When you left me. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 22 [informant] => xHeathenx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

End of a Familiar Romance

Contributed by xHeathenx on Monday, 21st February 2011 @ 06:48:01 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I apologize if it's too short, I've recently been writing poems in my cell phone's "notes" function, so I don't forget good pieces or lines that come to me, especially at work.

What is love?
Can we be sure?
It's a word without
any single meaning
and expressed in or by
the context of our
very own emotions.
For me it isn't known
but it's felt. I feel it
every time you look
at me, and all I can do
is smile out of happiness.
I feel it as I hold you
While you slowly drift away
and start to fall asleep.
I felt it when we had played
hard to get, even though
we had both been gotten.
I felt it when we looked
at the stars, and picked
one to be only ours.
One that was unique
(just like you).
I felt it when we kissed
and when we made love
and I felt still...
When you left me.

Copyright © xHeathenx ... [ 2011-02-21 06:48:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: End of a Familiar Romance (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Monday, 21st February 2011 @ 08:50:56 AM AEST
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Many would say the more succinct the poem th;e more pround the message .
enoyed the emotion and feelings iin your poem;. Thanks for sharin g

will

Re: End of a Familiar Romance (User Rating: 1 )
by poeticjestix on Monday, 21st February 2011 @ 01:48:17 PM AEST
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awesome! I like the trick of switching present to past tense.nasty . It worked beautifully.

Re: End of a Familiar Romance (User Rating: 1 )
by Dirkj on Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 06:40:54 AM AEST
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yep , got to love it, nicely done

Re: End of a Familiar Romance (User Rating: 1 )
by OnceAnAngel on Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 06:49:53 AM AEST
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this is a good one. i admire the way you conveyed a positive feel even though she left...
Love.. to me, its selfless.

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