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Array ( [sid] => 164900 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => First Love [time] => 2011-02-21 06:15:39 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It's funny how life is
The decisions we make
Although ours was the right one
I Can still feel the flame
In your voice when
We call back the past

Our passion was the same
Our loves the same
We had our chance
But screwed it up
Too many drunken nights
Too many drunken town fights
With you naked on the bonnet
Of my car while driving through town

Thinking back now
It was,,,, maybe,,,, a senseless time
Our idea of fun
Shocked our friends
You are total wrecks
They said time after time

Everybody was expecting us
Flat on our face
But we showed them
It would never happen
When we broke up
Just in time

We were not rough
We were just 2 young people
With the same soul
Playing with a fire
We had no way to control

First loves never die
It just moves on
In different bodies
In different minds

First loves just never die [comments] => 2 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Dirkj [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

First Love

Contributed by Dirkj on Monday, 21st February 2011 @ 06:15:39 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

It's funny how life is
The decisions we make
Although ours was the right one
I Can still feel the flame
In your voice when
We call back the past

Our passion was the same
Our loves the same
We had our chance
But screwed it up
Too many drunken nights
Too many drunken town fights
With you naked on the bonnet
Of my car while driving through town

Thinking back now
It was,,,, maybe,,,, a senseless time
Our idea of fun
Shocked our friends
You are total wrecks
They said time after time

Everybody was expecting us
Flat on our face
But we showed them
It would never happen
When we broke up
Just in time

We were not rough
We were just 2 young people
With the same soul
Playing with a fire
We had no way to control

First loves never die
It just moves on
In different bodies
In different minds

First loves just never die

Copyright © Dirkj ... [ 2011-02-21 06:15:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: First Love (User Rating: 1 )
by CommasCanSeperate on Monday, 21st February 2011 @ 01:07:02 PM AEST
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Thats so damn sweet.. and true.. and beautifully wrote.. thanks for sharing x x x

Re: First Love (User Rating: 1 )
by nachi1981 on Monday, 21st February 2011 @ 07:32:45 PM AEST
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Very nicely written :)

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