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Array ( [sid] => 164862 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Moon Walk. [time] => 2011-02-19 01:09:17 [hometext] => I love the full moon. To see its giant smile reflected on the mountain lake is priceless. [bodytext] => Tonight moon is walking on water.
Ignited by solitude it creeps across the lake
With delicate silky steps.
In the frosty burning distance
An owl measures the silence,
His chest puffed with soppy pride.
The air reverberates with his spine tingling call.
And all the while the night slowly matures,
Darkness meandering along path
And in wood, settling between the winter trees.
By ghostly stump and in secret hollow
The moon arrives with a giant golden smile,
Brushes away the stars and clouds,
Settles for simplicity,
Treading the water of the mountain lake.
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 27 [informant] => cashfan1 [notes] => Corrected spelling as requested (author's note) ~ Moderator_18 Feb 19, 2011 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )

Moon Walk.

Contributed by cashfan1 on Saturday, 19th February 2011 @ 01:09:17 AM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

Tonight moon is walking on water.
Ignited by solitude it creeps across the lake
With delicate silky steps.
In the frosty burning distance
An owl measures the silence,
His chest puffed with soppy pride.
The air reverberates with his spine tingling call.
And all the while the night slowly matures,
Darkness meandering along path
And in wood, settling between the winter trees.
By ghostly stump and in secret hollow
The moon arrives with a giant golden smile,
Brushes away the stars and clouds,
Settles for simplicity,
Treading the water of the mountain lake.

Copyright © cashfan1 ... [ 2011-02-19 01:09:17]
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Re: Moon Walk. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th February 2011 @ 01:18:44 AM AEST
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Both excellent imagery and an imaginative story line. Once again, you paint a beautiful picture with your words and bring the galaxy to life in the reader's mind. Thank you.

Re: Moon Walk. (User Rating: 1 )
by huwbeauty on Saturday, 19th February 2011 @ 03:30:41 AM AEST
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Beautiful,sheer brilliance,once again I find myself transported by your wonderful imagery.
Thanks.

Mat.

Re: Moon Walk. (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Saturday, 19th February 2011 @ 07:05:18 AM AEST
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Hi Dennis,

Just brilliant, Dennis. Nature in all her wonder
owes you a great deal - you sell her beauty in
words of pure integrity!

Tommy

Re: Moon Walk. (User Rating: 1 )
by polaris773 on Saturday, 19th February 2011 @ 05:58:08 PM AEST
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nice picture painted

Re: Moon Walk. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 19th February 2011 @ 06:27:34 PM AEST
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I luv the beauty in this write.
I luv the full moon Too.
Blessings,
emy

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