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Array ( [sid] => 16482 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => broken picture [time] => 2003-04-24 04:35:00 [hometext] => This poem is really weird I wrote this poem from my imagination,
It's different from my other poems. [bodytext] => A picture of you and me I hold in my hand
Suddenly..... my mind stops
I stare at the image of your face
Teardrops run down from my eyes
The picture falls from my hand
glass is shattered on the floor
as I look at our picture
a piece of glass had torn through you
as I look closer I see blood circling the picture
I don't seem to know where the blood came from but it was dripping down from your face
then the phone rings
I heard what happened to you
I fall to the ground shattered in tears
I'm so shocked that you have died.
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broken picture

Contributed by youngpoet1989 on Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

A picture of you and me I hold in my hand
Suddenly..... my mind stops
I stare at the image of your face
Teardrops run down from my eyes
The picture falls from my hand
glass is shattered on the floor
as I look at our picture
a piece of glass had torn through you
as I look closer I see blood circling the picture
I don't seem to know where the blood came from but it was dripping down from your face
then the phone rings
I heard what happened to you
I fall to the ground shattered in tears
I'm so shocked that you have died.

Copyright © youngpoet1989 ... [ 2003-04-24 04:35:00]
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Re: broken picture (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 05:05:46 AM AEST
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Wow! This is really powerful. What a great poem. Thanks for sharing.

sleepless_siren

Re: broken picture (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 10:48:26 AM AEST
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strong write a very good one
Sharon

Re: broken picture (User Rating: 1 )
by springchic1979 on Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 04:13:10 PM AEST
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Ooo! I could picture that perfectly as I read it. That sent a shiver down my spine. I loved it!

Yvonne

Re: broken picture (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 07:59:31 PM AEST
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Wow put tears in my eyes very vivid, descriptive imagery I loved this.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: broken picture (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexygirl on Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 12:25:44 PM AEST
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This is wrtten so well...I could see the images you were portrayed here....

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