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Array ( [sid] => 164797 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Crying From Bar To Bar [time] => 2011-02-15 23:51:14 [hometext] => Poem goes out to everyone who have had a blunder in their love life lately, oh and Neil had to use one of your lines , hope you don't mind [bodytext] => I Called you to meet me in the bar
I Have something in my pocket
I would like to share

As i go on bended knee
You stopped me
And said WAIT WAIT
There is something you should know
I Don't love you no more

I Started walking from
Town to Town
Bar to Bar
To find happiness
Being naked with
Every woman i can find

Never saw your face
In the background
Following me around
Till one day
In one bar
You said stop it
I'm Not gonna allow you
To cry in your pretzels anymore

You taught me so much
In so little time
To be patient
And wait for the right one

Let's have a drink
On those who have
Just found pure love [comments] => 2 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 68 [informant] => Dirkj [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fictional )

Crying From Bar To Bar

Contributed by Dirkj on Tuesday, 15th February 2011 @ 11:51:14 PM in AEST
Topic: fictional

I Called you to meet me in the bar
I Have something in my pocket
I would like to share

As i go on bended knee
You stopped me
And said WAIT WAIT
There is something you should know
I Don't love you no more

I Started walking from
Town to Town
Bar to Bar
To find happiness
Being naked with
Every woman i can find

Never saw your face
In the background
Following me around
Till one day
In one bar
You said stop it
I'm Not gonna allow you
To cry in your pretzels anymore

You taught me so much
In so little time
To be patient
And wait for the right one

Let's have a drink
On those who have
Just found pure love

Copyright © Dirkj ... [ 2011-02-15 23:51:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Crying From Bar To Bar (User Rating: 1 )
by billc1970 on Wednesday, 16th February 2011 @ 02:55:03 PM AEST
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ii like

Re: Crying From Bar To Bar (User Rating: 1 )
by Sagefairy on Wednesday, 16th February 2011 @ 04:16:15 PM AEST
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Good story. If someone gets naked with just anyone, either they or the anyone is bound to find heartache in most cases...
I like!

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