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Array ( [sid] => 164778 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Reality [time] => 2011-02-15 03:46:46 [hometext] => I wrote this about a girl who I fell in love, but sadly, she did not feel the same way. Havent given up hope yet though [bodytext] => Every night, when I fall asleep
I become more alive than I could ever believe

For the rush of feelings that hit me
When Im with you in my dreams
Are so intensely beautiful
They become my reality

My actual reality
Ceases to exist
All I can do is wait to dream
For I cannot resist

I know this feeling is real
Even though its in my dreams
For my dreams are more real
Than anything my eyes have ever seen

But then comes the morning
Darker than night could ever be
Because every morning my heart rebreaks
When I realize that youre not here with me

And so begins another day
All I can do is wait til night
When I know I'll be with you in my dreams
Where I know you'll be my light [comments] => 3 [counter] => 143 [topic] => 2 [informant] => KC [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

My Reality

Contributed by KC on Tuesday, 15th February 2011 @ 03:46:46 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Every night, when I fall asleep
I become more alive than I could ever believe

For the rush of feelings that hit me
When Im with you in my dreams
Are so intensely beautiful
They become my reality

My actual reality
Ceases to exist
All I can do is wait to dream
For I cannot resist

I know this feeling is real
Even though its in my dreams
For my dreams are more real
Than anything my eyes have ever seen

But then comes the morning
Darker than night could ever be
Because every morning my heart rebreaks
When I realize that youre not here with me

And so begins another day
All I can do is wait til night
When I know I'll be with you in my dreams
Where I know you'll be my light

Copyright © KC ... [ 2011-02-15 03:46:46]
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Re: My Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th February 2011 @ 09:26:56 AM AEST
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I love poems that ryhm and have a story with in it. This is so good :)

Re: My Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by HERO on Wednesday, 16th February 2011 @ 02:16:53 AM AEST
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This is great! I can feel your frustration from the situation, but at the same time, I can feel your hope for the outcome. Hope you get her!!

Re: My Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by KC on Saturday, 26th February 2011 @ 04:06:53 AM AEST
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Thanks for the kind words! Im glad you like it

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