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And salvation in the other,
Watching her feelings pass,
As he becomes my lover’s lover,

Holding just a thread,
Is still holding on,
Fading away… I will watch,
Until the day it is gone,

Walking the path of vengeance,
Head low… thoughts held within,
destroyed from inside … but soon they will pay,
Smoldering rage… love spread so thin,

Release all the pain… revenge it begins.
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Lustful Vengeance

Contributed by deusdeira on Friday, 11th February 2011 @ 04:01:23 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Holding purgatory in one hand,
And salvation in the other,
Watching her feelings pass,
As he becomes my lover’s lover,

Holding just a thread,
Is still holding on,
Fading away… I will watch,
Until the day it is gone,

Walking the path of vengeance,
Head low… thoughts held within,
destroyed from inside … but soon they will pay,
Smoldering rage… love spread so thin,

Release all the pain… revenge it begins.

Copyright Â© deusdeira ... [ 2011-02-11 04:01:23]
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Re: Lustful Vengeance (User Rating: 1 )
by RowenM on Friday, 11th February 2011 @ 06:14:29 AM AEST
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"Head low...thoughts held within"
Really liked that phrase.
And the whole poem is dark enough.
I liked it :D

Re: Lustful Vengeance (User Rating: 1 )
by cssdman on Friday, 11th February 2011 @ 12:04:29 PM AEST
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Deep man, I've been there. I feel your pain bro.

Re: Lustful Vengeance (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Friday, 11th February 2011 @ 01:15:30 PM AEST
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deep, dark, and real..awsome write! i love it.

Re: Lustful Vengeance (User Rating: 1 )
by InfinitePoet on Tuesday, 22nd March 2011 @ 10:29:28 PM AEST
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Nice!!!! I have been at this very point in my life a few times over and thats all you can think of is revenge!! NIce capture of emotion here!!! Keep writing and sharing always
respectfully,
Dana

Re: Lustful Vengeance (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 3rd March 2012 @ 07:31:35 PM AEST
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Nice one. I definitely relate to the feelings of wanting to get revenge and it makes for great poems. I've been there, been tempted but then I figure, alas, karma will kick in...sooner or later. But again, makes a great poem...or story.

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