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Yesterday I saw her face
I’m so in love
I take a picture in my head
I’ll meet you there

I’m so lonely
You never came to meet my friends
That live upstairs
We were waiting
To play sequence
So much fun

I can’t stop screaming
I’m a wreck
But they are too
Take my blue skies
I want the rain to soak right through

Knife my body
It’s ok to show my pain
I feel inside
I’m not hiding anything
I feel alive

The drugs I’m taking
are ok I’m finally cured
you’re so absurd
soak up sunshine everyday
to hear his words

Can’t stop crying
Break my fists
To break these mirrors
That laugh right at me
I’m ashamed to see my face
Then cut my wrists

I still love you
Don’t be scared
you love me too
You make me smile
And dance until the rain leaks through [comments] => 3 [counter] => 251 [topic] => 59 [informant] => scottstone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )

Blinded By Sunshine

Contributed by scottstone on Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 04:03:07 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

I’m so excited
Yesterday I saw her face
I’m so in love
I take a picture in my head
I’ll meet you there

I’m so lonely
You never came to meet my friends
That live upstairs
We were waiting
To play sequence
So much fun

I can’t stop screaming
I’m a wreck
But they are too
Take my blue skies
I want the rain to soak right through

Knife my body
It’s ok to show my pain
I feel inside
I’m not hiding anything
I feel alive

The drugs I’m taking
are ok I’m finally cured
you’re so absurd
soak up sunshine everyday
to hear his words

Can’t stop crying
Break my fists
To break these mirrors
That laugh right at me
I’m ashamed to see my face
Then cut my wrists

I still love you
Don’t be scared
you love me too
You make me smile
And dance until the rain leaks through

Copyright Â© scottstone ... [ 2011-02-10 16:03:07]
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Re: Blinded By Sunshine (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 09:15:11 PM AEST
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Damn this feels intense. I don't know if you meant for it to be a fast pace,or if I just read it as such, but that's how I thought of it. Almost picturing different personalities taking turns being hurt, and hurting themselves and the body that is their host over a period of time, stemming from an obsession of someone, who may or may not exist, and even if they do, could've been any random person who doesn't even know the narrator(s).

Re: Blinded By Sunshine (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Friday, 11th February 2011 @ 04:23:25 PM AEST
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You capture loneliness in this poem. All we want is to be loved, even if it hurts. Well done.

Re: Blinded By Sunshine (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 09:51:46 PM AEST
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And dance until the rain leaks through
Awesome writing.
I'm still reading.
smiles,
emy

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