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Illuminating the room like the glow of dawn.
Neon rainbows visibly vibrant; dancing before my eyes,
Inspiring my effervescent movement; overwhelming my soul.

Waves of heat consume lively bodies; we all move as one.
Music flowing through our veins, our minds;
Uncontrollably hypnotizing.
Fast and passionate,
We long for the everlasting song.
Beating hearts, rapid breath,
Aching for rest; the melody is our trance.

Yet night becomes day as a song becomes silent,
Brought back to life; reality seeping in.
Temporarily content, I await the nightlife,
Where I can be free once more.
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Dance, Dance

Contributed by Peaseblossom on Wednesday, 9th February 2011 @ 11:46:22 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Florescent shades sparkle around me,
Illuminating the room like the glow of dawn.
Neon rainbows visibly vibrant; dancing before my eyes,
Inspiring my effervescent movement; overwhelming my soul.

Waves of heat consume lively bodies; we all move as one.
Music flowing through our veins, our minds;
Uncontrollably hypnotizing.
Fast and passionate,
We long for the everlasting song.
Beating hearts, rapid breath,
Aching for rest; the melody is our trance.

Yet night becomes day as a song becomes silent,
Brought back to life; reality seeping in.
Temporarily content, I await the nightlife,
Where I can be free once more.

Copyright © Peaseblossom ... [ 2011-02-09 23:46:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Dance, Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by poeticjestix on Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 03:01:06 PM AEST
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living for the weekend. I remember it well!

Re: Dance, Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by LizzyC on Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 04:24:02 PM AEST
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I just really loved your poem I could really see a person dancing, and I can't see a lot of poems, but I can see yours you did a good job writing.

Re: Dance, Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniellemarie on Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 10:45:18 PM AEST
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I Like this alot the night life is a great escape

Re: Dance, Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Friday, 11th February 2011 @ 01:06:20 PM AEST
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dancing is very theraputic..i am not a good dancer, but this poem really hits home..because i'm that loser who comes home from work at night, turns on the radio, and dances around in the privacy of my home because it just makes me feel good to move my body to the melody..i can really see, and feel this poem. thanks for posting it.

Re: Dance, Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 16th June 2012 @ 03:03:19 PM AEST
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Being a horrible dancer it's hard for me to relate to the actual dancing part but I loved the imagery in your poem and I can relate to that because I've done a lot of watching.

Nicely done,

Thank you,

Tim

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