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Everyday when I walk the 9-5
People preform and autopsy as I go by.

No utensils are used, no doctors are present
Just sheep passing by, with my body transparent.

They peer straight through, hoping to see
But they'll never know what makes the real me.

They decifer and judge, looking for something wrong
But all they find is a reason why they don't belong.

A person's existence can't be summed up in one glance
Yet they gather in drones, just for the chance.

I know who I am, the man that dwells in me
It doesn't take a textbook or a fancy degree.

I am what you are, a prayer lost in flight
Looking for someone to find...to join me in my plight

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Alone In a Crowded Room

Contributed by RyanS on Wednesday, 9th February 2011 @ 11:00:09 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Everyday when I walk the 9-5
People preform and autopsy as I go by.

No utensils are used, no doctors are present
Just sheep passing by, with my body transparent.

They peer straight through, hoping to see
But they'll never know what makes the real me.

They decifer and judge, looking for something wrong
But all they find is a reason why they don't belong.

A person's existence can't be summed up in one glance
Yet they gather in drones, just for the chance.

I know who I am, the man that dwells in me
It doesn't take a textbook or a fancy degree.

I am what you are, a prayer lost in flight
Looking for someone to find...to join me in my plight

Copyright © RyanS ... [ 2011-02-09 11:00:09]
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Re: Alone In a Crowded Room (User Rating: 1 )
by Iron on Wednesday, 9th February 2011 @ 12:52:35 PM AEST
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Nice piece bro. Keep being odd, I mean keep standing out!

Re: Alone In a Crowded Room (User Rating: 1 )
by Aspirant on Wednesday, 9th February 2011 @ 11:43:50 PM AEST
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"I am what you are, a prayer lost in flight"

Stunning line. I enjoyed the read.

Re: Alone In a Crowded Room (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 05:04:14 PM AEST
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oh man..i feel like i've been searching my whole life for this poem, these words..and i never could find them. this is an outstanding peice..i can't even tell you how much so..thank you for writting this, and thank you for sharing it. I even relate to your authors note..this is just, amazing, it really is.

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