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Array ( [sid] => 164649 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => death negotiating [time] => 2011-02-08 10:58:26 [hometext] => [bodytext] => insufficient quiver. . .

you ate away my struggling
& nuances of hurt
of hope

withering beneath your feasting
I wanted. . .
just. . . to peel away
that membrane
where you set bloom
or mist my sleep
to cease the deep
& dark cupboarding of gloom

my face, concave
flesh gave away
the tone & verve
the essence & the vigor

gave up the ghost
I felt morose

but still. . .

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death negotiating

Contributed by elle on Tuesday, 8th February 2011 @ 10:58:26 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

insufficient quiver. . .

you ate away my struggling
& nuances of hurt
of hope

withering beneath your feasting
I wanted. . .
just. . . to peel away
that membrane
where you set bloom
or mist my sleep
to cease the deep
& dark cupboarding of gloom

my face, concave
flesh gave away
the tone & verve
the essence & the vigor

gave up the ghost
I felt morose

but still. . .

death did deliver

Copyright © elle ... [ 2011-02-08 10:58:26]
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Re: death negotiating (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Tuesday, 8th February 2011 @ 01:51:51 PM AEST
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Very deep and very strong. Well written in a smooth readable style. Thanks for sharing.

Re: death negotiating (User Rating: 1 )
by Breezy on Tuesday, 8th February 2011 @ 05:12:27 PM AEST
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Oh elle..... unbelievably intense. And passionate. That last line
is so wonderfully juicy, I could taste it....
Amazing, as your work most certainly always is. I adore this.
Right from the first delicious line to the last.

~ Breezy

Re: death negotiating (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 8th February 2011 @ 08:46:00 PM AEST
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On a side note (I know, I know, I'm typing it first) death did negotiated with Dean on Super Natural. Smile!

Smile!

Damn this is sad. I don't handle death well and this definitely brings that feeling with it...this this awesome write of yours. And actually? The power of your writing does convey images of horror in me ol' cranium.

Phew, another great from Elle.

Re: death negotiating (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 04:38:46 AM AEST
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yep - one of the true certainties. we should teach that one earlier to the kiddies. Can we negotiate? maybe the method, if we are lucky, but never, never the outcome.

S.

Re: death negotiating (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 05:16:18 PM AEST
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this poem is to die for..haha. i had to.
but really, i love this peice..even if i could negotiate the outcome, i don't think i would want to, i've already had enough of the live version and i'm only 25..lol.

Re: death negotiating (User Rating: 1 )
by xnickix7 on Monday, 14th March 2011 @ 08:57:59 PM AEST
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GREAT piece. "my face, concave flesh gave away". I love this line :) great job!

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