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Array ( [sid] => 164646 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => twisted game [time] => 2011-02-07 22:24:55 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I was so close to tasting redemption
on my lips. I was so close to it yet
so far away. I wanted it so bad
and it slipped away along with
my pride, denial is all I have to
live with. Attraction is an evil force
it will grab you by your feet to leave
you landing on your head. All of
these men and their sneaky grins their
in my dreams touching me and teasing
me. All my most hidden desires come
crashing down on me again, I wanted
him but he loved another, I have a man
who wants me too much. Twisted games
we play, I want to play twisted games [comments] => 4 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 22 [informant] => DanielleMarie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

twisted game

Contributed by DanielleMarie on Monday, 7th February 2011 @ 10:24:55 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I was so close to tasting redemption
on my lips. I was so close to it yet
so far away. I wanted it so bad
and it slipped away along with
my pride, denial is all I have to
live with. Attraction is an evil force
it will grab you by your feet to leave
you landing on your head. All of
these men and their sneaky grins their
in my dreams touching me and teasing
me. All my most hidden desires come
crashing down on me again, I wanted
him but he loved another, I have a man
who wants me too much. Twisted games
we play, I want to play twisted games

Copyright © DanielleMarie ... [ 2011-02-07 22:24:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: twisted game (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 8th February 2011 @ 12:22:15 AM AEST
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Yo u best think about this one long and hard. Been there done that but in the I was just hurting others not my self.
Great writing.
blessings, huggs,
emy

Re: twisted game (User Rating: 1 )
by Dirkj on Tuesday, 8th February 2011 @ 05:53:26 AM AEST
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Dangerous games, but i have enjoyd the poem, if one can , well done

Re: twisted game (User Rating: 1 )
by Alphas0z on Tuesday, 8th February 2011 @ 11:21:22 AM AEST
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Great write. I can't say that i feel this way though, but feelings and thoughts change eventually.

Re: twisted game (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Wednesday, 9th February 2011 @ 03:28:21 AM AEST
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Great write, playing games is often a reaction to lost love and you have described this eloquently. Favourite line Attraction is an evil force.......on your head, really like that line and what I can see in my head and understand in my mind simultaneously.

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