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[aid] => mick
[title] => I hope for the day I wont cry anymore
[time] => 2011-02-06 16:05:19
[hometext] => This is the first poem I've submitted on here. I wasnt sure where to put it so I put it here. Constructive critisim please...thanks. Also, I know its not that good since I'm only 13 so try to take it easy I'm not experenced with writing free verse poems
[bodytext] => There is a lot I learned not to show or ask Because every time I did It never turned out right The biggest thing I learned not to do is to cry Because I tend to cry to often So now I try to turn that sadness into anger Only when it gets to be too much do I cry I hate myself for it My sadness turns to anger and that anger is bottled up If it’s not released I tend to hurt myself and others around me If I cry I’ll end up crying myself to sleep And crying yourself to sleep is one of the worst ways to go to sleep So now I hope for the day I just don’t cry anymore [comments] => 2 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 32 [informant] => AkidaUmichi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
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