Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+ |
Custom Search
|
|
||||
Welcome ! | Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link | 29-May 13:06:25 AEST | ||
|
||||
|
||||
|
|
Array
(
[sid] => 164614
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => White Sails
[time] => 2011-02-06 05:03:43
[hometext] => I wrote this on a trip I went on with my school. We visited many of the battlefields of World War I. I was asked to read it at an assembly along with a monolouge of a young soldier but I never read the poem for some reason.
[bodytext] => I lie in the trench Bodies all around Hardly feeling, barely breathing The shells continue to pound I lie in the trench And think of the past Of my family and friends Wish that future would last I lie in the trench And listen to rain Maybe it's bullets Don't know, they're both the same I lie in the trench And listen to death I slowly grow numb And draw my last breath I lie in the trench and fade slowly away I don't hold on I don't want to stay I lie in the trench My body fails I float far away On a boat with WHITE SAILS [comments] => 5 [counter] => 262 [topic] => 57 [informant] => Evanescencefreak [notes] => Corrected spelling as requested ~ Moderator_18 Feb 6, 2011 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => war )
|