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Array ( [sid] => 164608 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Responsibility-Part 1 [time] => 2011-02-05 18:31:20 [hometext] => I wrote this poem for children. I hope it inspires them to help our world. [bodytext] => The girl with the powers
Went up to her room
When she looked out the window
All she saw was doom and gloom

She closed her eyes
And wished it away
Then everything changed
On that very day

Oil turned to water
Smog turned to dust
Plastic turned to flowers
And metal began to rust

The world had changed
As she had meant it to
“Now things are better” she said
“And I’ll finish the job through”

She waved her hand
Across the sea
Sea turtles, pelicans, and fish
All were let to be

She clapped her hands twice
And the world turned to see
The girl on the mountain
Who had set the world free







On the next day
She wanted more morality
She wanted people to be good
She wanted that to be reality

She went to Wall street
And stomped her feet
Then the very next second
Those men’s hearts began to beat

Then she went to Washington D.C.
And began to twirl her hand
The next thing people knew
There was peace throughout the land

She went to the highest mountain,
Smiled and blew a kiss over the edge
Then all the ignorant people in the world
Were immediately filled with knowledge

Next she went to a meadow
And turned a stick into a rose
And as she worked this magic
All the fast food restaurants closed

She clapped her hands twice
And the world turned to see
The girl on the mountain
Who had set the world free
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 5 [informant] => MountainGirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChildrensPoetry )
Responsibility-Part 1

Contributed by MountainGirl on Saturday, 5th February 2011 @ 06:31:20 PM in AEST
Topic: ChildrensPoetry



The girl with the powers
Went up to her room
When she looked out the window
All she saw was doom and gloom

She closed her eyes
And wished it away
Then everything changed
On that very day

Oil turned to water
Smog turned to dust
Plastic turned to flowers
And metal began to rust

The world had changed
As she had meant it to
“Now things are better” she said
“And I’ll finish the job through”

She waved her hand
Across the sea
Sea turtles, pelicans, and fish
All were let to be

She clapped her hands twice
And the world turned to see
The girl on the mountain
Who had set the world free







On the next day
She wanted more morality
She wanted people to be good
She wanted that to be reality

She went to Wall street
And stomped her feet
Then the very next second
Those men’s hearts began to beat

Then she went to Washington D.C.
And began to twirl her hand
The next thing people knew
There was peace throughout the land

She went to the highest mountain,
Smiled and blew a kiss over the edge
Then all the ignorant people in the world
Were immediately filled with knowledge

Next she went to a meadow
And turned a stick into a rose
And as she worked this magic
All the fast food restaurants closed

She clapped her hands twice
And the world turned to see
The girl on the mountain
Who had set the world free




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Re: Responsibility-Part 1 (User Rating: 1 )
by scottstone on Sunday, 6th February 2011 @ 02:05:55 AM AEST
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very nice


Re: Responsibility-Part 1 (User Rating: 1 )
by kleetas on Sunday, 6th February 2011 @ 04:27:50 AM AEST
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nice..for the ten year olds


Re: Responsibility-Part 1 (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 9th February 2011 @ 09:14:48 PM AEST
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Incredible writing. Where does the ten year old come from?
Just curious.
This write will inspire any one that reads it.
We all need this framed and on the wall where all can see.
Really a good thing here.
huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy




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