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Array ( [sid] => 16458 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => drowned world [time] => 2003-04-23 16:35:00 [hometext] => my last two weeks was devastating. i saw death in front of me, and that took my father away. [bodytext] => i feel like i came from the bottom of the sea,
where i had to touch its ground.
i had to reach them before its too late,
but i came late afterall.
that caught my breath in the middle of my chest.
it was the deepest i have ever been, and it wasnt easy.
there, i saw my destiny, and everyone's destiny.
i took a handful sand hoping to bring them to the surface of the earth.
but it went off my hand as i upsurge from the sea.
when i came back, i thought everything was a nightmare.
i look at my hand gripping still,
holding still to the mystery of the sea ...
there was none that i brought to learn from.
it only became a sake of experience.
so when i get back and had my air, i lit up a cigar,
and walk on to the sand i made of cigar butts.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 13 [informant] => stoic_squirm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

drowned world

Contributed by stoic_squirm on Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 04:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

i feel like i came from the bottom of the sea,
where i had to touch its ground.
i had to reach them before its too late,
but i came late afterall.
that caught my breath in the middle of my chest.
it was the deepest i have ever been, and it wasnt easy.
there, i saw my destiny, and everyone's destiny.
i took a handful sand hoping to bring them to the surface of the earth.
but it went off my hand as i upsurge from the sea.
when i came back, i thought everything was a nightmare.
i look at my hand gripping still,
holding still to the mystery of the sea ...
there was none that i brought to learn from.
it only became a sake of experience.
so when i get back and had my air, i lit up a cigar,
and walk on to the sand i made of cigar butts.

Copyright © stoic_squirm ... [ 2003-04-23 16:35:00]
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Re: drowned world (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 01:08:29 AM AEST
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meloncholy........ such a touching write. Sorry for your loss. Hug for you.
Michelle

Re: drowned world (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 11:45:14 AM AEST
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a very most moving write.. hugs nessa

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