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it left us small notes
unsigned & scattered throughout our days
untitled melodies
it played to us
all those unmarked roads
winding & turning back on themselves,
it led us down

if love hadn't been so persistent
what we have might not be at all. . .
I might not know
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anonymous

Contributed by elle on Friday, 28th January 2011 @ 04:37:46 AM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry

our love was anonymous for a long time.
it left us small notes
unsigned & scattered throughout our days
untitled melodies
it played to us
all those unmarked roads
winding & turning back on themselves,
it led us down

if love hadn't been so persistent
what we have might not be at all. . .
I might not know
the thrill of you

Copyright © elle ... [ 2011-01-28 04:37:46]
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Re: anonymous (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Friday, 28th January 2011 @ 02:29:22 PM AEST
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I adore your writing elle. There is a such a mystique in your pen that grips the reader to the very end. Waiting there is possibility daring hearts to run with it. Fantastic job as always.

duff

Re: anonymous (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Saturday, 29th January 2011 @ 02:40:51 AM AEST
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Elle
this is a wonderful write. One of the best I have read here in a long time. Very strong yet easy on the mind. Well done.

Re: anonymous (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Saturday, 29th January 2011 @ 08:39:26 PM AEST
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nice one, elle. Love building in increments seems to be more stable and long lasting that the wham bam, over the moon stuff.

And the hints and whispers, as you describe, do seem to patiently wait for the slow dawning of recognition.

Spike

Re: anonymous (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 30th January 2011 @ 04:13:17 AM AEST
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Smile!

Re: anonymous (User Rating: 1 )
by Xnoybis on Sunday, 30th January 2011 @ 06:14:27 AM AEST
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Short, sharp..poignant. I liked it.

Re: anonymous (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Friday, 4th February 2011 @ 09:03:38 AM AEST
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Dear Elle,
I love how love has it own persona in this poem;

'it left us small notes
unsigned & scattered throughout our days'
'it played to us'

Awesome!

ming

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