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Array ( [sid] => 164506 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Prayer for My Lost Home [time] => 2011-01-28 03:54:55 [hometext] => I wrote this poem in memory of a tragic incident that changed my and my man's life in a bad way. I pray we get our home and good life back Amen. Read & comment [bodytext] => You were mine, all mine
Your every breath, your everything was mine
We had the best love among our friends
we had a beautiful home that shone with our love
That was full of our laughters
We had no complaints with life
We were the love rockers
We rocked every moment of our life
World was all ours

All of a sudden a hurricane ran over
It made a clean sweep
It turned our home into rubble
and our laughters into tears
Now, broken promises & teared joys are all we have

I pray to God our home get good again
with smiles & laughters
with cheers and giggles
and no evil can give it any harm
Amen
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 268 [topic] => 22 [informant] => seshmark [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Prayer for My Lost Home

Contributed by seshmark on Friday, 28th January 2011 @ 03:54:55 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You were mine, all mine
Your every breath, your everything was mine
We had the best love among our friends
we had a beautiful home that shone with our love
That was full of our laughters
We had no complaints with life
We were the love rockers
We rocked every moment of our life
World was all ours

All of a sudden a hurricane ran over
It made a clean sweep
It turned our home into rubble
and our laughters into tears
Now, broken promises & teared joys are all we have

I pray to God our home get good again
with smiles & laughters
with cheers and giggles
and no evil can give it any harm
Amen

Copyright © seshmark ... [ 2011-01-28 03:54:55]
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Re: Prayer for My Lost Home (User Rating: 1 )
by kleetas on Friday, 28th January 2011 @ 09:31:43 PM AEST
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hurricane forces leave hurricane dreams built on foundations where hopes and dreams have mightier power and mightier space to rebuild bigger castles to thwart the past fate....

Re: Prayer for My Lost Home (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Saturday, 29th January 2011 @ 02:44:37 AM AEST
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Wow! This is a hurricane of a poem. I am sorry about the circumstances which have conspired against you, I also pray things get good again for you soon. You have a talent for poetry and I hope to read more from you soon.

Re: Prayer for My Lost Home (User Rating: 1 )
by CommasCanSeperate on Saturday, 29th January 2011 @ 05:57:51 PM AEST
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<3
Nicely written.
Very Deep.
My All The Prayers Be With You. X

Re: Prayer for My Lost Home (User Rating: 1 )
by Parishrut on Sunday, 30th January 2011 @ 04:29:37 AM AEST
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The poem is very good, and is very effective. Because of the simplicity in the language, it flows swiftly throughout. Great work. I hope that your life will be filled with smiles and laughters again.

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