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[aid] => mick
[title] => immortal whore
[time] => 2011-01-26 12:49:26
[hometext] => 1st ever poem please comment!!! wether its good or bad or whatever....i need opinions!!!
[bodytext] => invited death to my doorstep and excluded my pride, left the whore in my, bed followed the pimp outside... he took what was left of my sanity and i cursed my life with this profanity... i only knew of peace when i caused pain, now im starting to feel there pain flowing through my veins... but it was different with her we were bound by hate, her mortal kiss made me immortal, i paid the piper of fate... I lacked the courage of my convictions, the will to abandon my addictions... im only flesh and blood stripped down the minimum bare, living on the thought that there is no hell or that they just dont want me there... If death had a heart he would be me, with evil as my point of view for no creature is under God as we!!! I said farewell to the whore and became what iv become, will you take care of her, my raven angel while im gone... now i listen to the souls no words can describe it, may aswel ask heaven what it sees, no one knows but the birds... I'm a spirit of preternatural flesh. Unhinged and empty you asked for a story of my life, my life was a tomb a graveyard of lost souls all resembling her face. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 316 [topic] => 13 [informant] => wallerdude [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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