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it would be for you
to love me
the way i love you
with every ounce of my soul
every ounce of my being
but wishes
never come true
i can hope
hope for a miracle
but miracles don't exist
never have
never will
but i wish they did
cause i could use one
i need a miracle
i need a wish
i need something
to change this void between us
to make us closer
then we've ever been before
i can't live without you
i need you to save me
i never meant for this to happen
to fall in love with you
i don't know why
i don't know how
i just did
and i don't know if i can help it
i want to be serious with you
i want you to listen
i want you to talk
not joke
i need you to be serious for once
i need a miracle
i need a wish
i need something
to change this void between us
to make us closer
then we've ever been before
i need you in my life
i need you close to me
i need to know
that you need me too
i need you
to tell me the truth
do you need me like i need you
i need a miracle
i need a wish
i need something
to change this void between us
to make us closer
then we've ever been before
i need you
to make my dreams
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Need

Contributed by RachelSixx on Friday, 21st January 2011 @ 06:19:44 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

if i had one wish
it would be for you
to love me
the way i love you
with every ounce of my soul
every ounce of my being
but wishes
never come true
i can hope
hope for a miracle
but miracles don't exist
never have
never will
but i wish they did
cause i could use one
i need a miracle
i need a wish
i need something
to change this void between us
to make us closer
then we've ever been before
i can't live without you
i need you to save me
i never meant for this to happen
to fall in love with you
i don't know why
i don't know how
i just did
and i don't know if i can help it
i want to be serious with you
i want you to listen
i want you to talk
not joke
i need you to be serious for once
i need a miracle
i need a wish
i need something
to change this void between us
to make us closer
then we've ever been before
i need you in my life
i need you close to me
i need to know
that you need me too
i need you
to tell me the truth
do you need me like i need you
i need a miracle
i need a wish
i need something
to change this void between us
to make us closer
then we've ever been before
i need you
to make my dreams
come true

Copyright © RachelSixx ... [ 2011-01-21 18:19:44]
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Re: Need (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 21st January 2011 @ 06:31:06 PM AEST
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This was very good. I hope your dreams come true! And if not I know I don't know you but you can talk to me!

Re: Need (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 21st January 2011 @ 11:40:49 PM AEST
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I relate to these emotional lyrics a lot. Especially this part:

i never meant for this to happen
to fall in love with you
i don't know why
i don't know how
i just did
and i don't know if i can help it

The strength of emotion definitely comes across.

Love is a freaking crazy thing, is it not? It definitely chooses us. We cannot just turn it off and it doesn't just go away.

Wish the best for you.

Take care,

Tim

Re: Need (User Rating: 1 )
by Dirkj on Saturday, 22nd January 2011 @ 12:37:24 AM AEST
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you can't control love, it's a very spontaneous action and it defnitily needs a spark to start and grow. hope you find your spark soon. i have enjoyd your poem a lot , well done

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