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I bet you could even get a date

your smile no one can beat
I would kick them in the seat

you say your okay
and your clothes shout "lets play"

you really thought, didn't you
you've fooled everyone...till now

...but...

you forgot one thing

you can't hide you eyes
and your eyes tell no lies

so tell the truth
how bad is it?

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Its in the eyes

Contributed by Jilli_bean on Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

your hair looks great
I bet you could even get a date

your smile no one can beat
I would kick them in the seat

you say your okay
and your clothes shout "lets play"

you really thought, didn't you
you've fooled everyone...till now

...but...

you forgot one thing

you can't hide you eyes
and your eyes tell no lies

so tell the truth
how bad is it?

Copyright © Jilli_bean ... [ 2003-04-23 04:35:00]
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Re: Its in the eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 10:46:21 PM AEST
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this poem is a lil confusin to me... this site doesn't usually give critiques... only supportin comments such as good write... i feel this poem is a little confusin to me maybe others catch it but i'd like to know what i means send me a message if you can
-Sid

Re: Its in the eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 07:29:55 PM AEST
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It's the darn truth, i liked this poem. I onlu understand it becasue I go through it every day! lol! Love:::Kirby

Re: Its in the eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by stargazer on Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 07:01:04 PM AEST
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This poem is scary. Not in the thriller way but because you told me that once. That my eyes can tell no lies... and then you told me to tell you just how bad it really was. Looks are decieving but a smile is even more. But your eyes... they can not lie, they are nothing but the bare truth. And there are those that can not handle the truth so they refuse to see what the eyes really show. But maybe it is better of that way in the end, right?

It really shows who your real friends are and who is just a "friend." You can fool everyone with your pretty smile and gorgeous body but your eyes are the window to your soul. Do not forget that.

I love it... I'm in love with it. Absoutely superb!

Amy

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