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Array ( [sid] => 164339 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Beast [time] => 2011-01-19 09:32:09 [hometext] => I'm not sure what catagory to put this in... sigh. Anyways, basically a poem about dark loveness. :D Look closely to the shape of this poem! It's kinda cool! [bodytext] => Dying inside without a trace
To weak to stare me in the face
Man up and take control
I'm losing patience with your soul
Apologies are useless
Your attempts are fruitless
Death cannot be swayed
Your debts must be payed
I thought you were my love
I thought to them you were above
Apparently you aren't just as you seem
I shouldn't have been tricked by a dream
Now I am alone and seething
Why do I regret your leaving?
I shouldn't be sorry for you
But is my heart really speaking true?
You betraying me wasn't enough
I somehow still crave your touch
Underneath all this pain
It is you I wish to gain
My love for you hasn't ceased
Even though I think your a beast
Please hide and leave me alone
Please don't pick up the phone
I'm not in the mood for lies
With every one told I cry
I still long for your hold
Your fingers have gone cold
Don't touch me anymore
I can't take what's in store
Goodnight my beastly liar
For now I am truly tired
My ability to deal has worn thin
My sanity is held by a pin
I loved the way you smile
I've been thinking about it for awhile
I cannot forget about you
You can't forget me too
But tonight I say goodbye for good
My beast [comments] => 3 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Depression-chan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
My Beast

Contributed by Depression-chan on Wednesday, 19th January 2011 @ 09:32:09 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Dying inside without a trace
To weak to stare me in the face
Man up and take control
I'm losing patience with your soul
Apologies are useless
Your attempts are fruitless
Death cannot be swayed
Your debts must be payed
I thought you were my love
I thought to them you were above
Apparently you aren't just as you seem
I shouldn't have been tricked by a dream
Now I am alone and seething
Why do I regret your leaving?
I shouldn't be sorry for you
But is my heart really speaking true?
You betraying me wasn't enough
I somehow still crave your touch
Underneath all this pain
It is you I wish to gain
My love for you hasn't ceased
Even though I think your a beast
Please hide and leave me alone
Please don't pick up the phone
I'm not in the mood for lies
With every one told I cry
I still long for your hold
Your fingers have gone cold
Don't touch me anymore
I can't take what's in store
Goodnight my beastly liar
For now I am truly tired
My ability to deal has worn thin
My sanity is held by a pin
I loved the way you smile
I've been thinking about it for awhile
I cannot forget about you
You can't forget me too
But tonight I say goodbye for good
My beast




Copyright © Depression-chan ... [ 2011-01-19 09:32:09]
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Re: My Beast (User Rating: 1 )
by CommasCanSeperate on Wednesday, 19th January 2011 @ 11:01:31 AM AEST
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Nicely put together and flows beautifully. Very well written m'dear ! x


Re: My Beast (User Rating: 1 )
by RachelSixx on Wednesday, 19th January 2011 @ 03:54:51 PM AEST
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you can really feel the emotion, it's beautiful.


Re: My Beast (User Rating: 1 )
by huwbeauty on Thursday, 20th January 2011 @ 12:09:18 AM AEST
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Well written,like the rhyme and the flow.
Mat.




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