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Array ( [sid] => 164265 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rewind [time] => 2011-01-15 01:02:06 [hometext] => I was in a bad accident a while back, a father lost control and we hit head on. His son was killed. It has affected me deeply [bodytext] => Looking back ....
On how far I have came
I see the faded highway
Flashing back
Flying amongst the stars
But feeling
The feeling of falling

Looking back....
Wishin I could turn back time
If I could change one thing,
One more second to react
I could have missed...
Erase that fatal memory.

He never knew...
This would be his last ride.
The car out of control
Feelin' haunted, twisted metal
His world changed,
I try to rewind,
asking God why
Even though I know the answer
I'm asking God to try

Looking back..
in my rearview mirror.
I see the faded highway.
I never knew that boy,
But there isn't a day
I don't think of boy.

Wishin it Hadn' ended that way,
But some things are meant
It's the way
it's supposed to be..
No one knows why
No answers even though we try.
My soul scarred
My tears falling amongst
The stars...
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 143 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Recyclebin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Rewind

Contributed by Recyclebin on Saturday, 15th January 2011 @ 01:02:06 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Looking back ....
On how far I have came
I see the faded highway
Flashing back
Flying amongst the stars
But feeling
The feeling of falling

Looking back....
Wishin I could turn back time
If I could change one thing,
One more second to react
I could have missed...
Erase that fatal memory.

He never knew...
This would be his last ride.
The car out of control
Feelin' haunted, twisted metal
His world changed,
I try to rewind,
asking God why
Even though I know the answer
I'm asking God to try

Looking back..
in my rearview mirror.
I see the faded highway.
I never knew that boy,
But there isn't a day
I don't think of boy.

Wishin it Hadn' ended that way,
But some things are meant
It's the way
it's supposed to be..
No one knows why
No answers even though we try.
My soul scarred
My tears falling amongst
The stars...

Copyright © Recyclebin ... [ 2011-01-15 01:02:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Rewind (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 15th January 2011 @ 08:02:41 AM AEST
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wow bin,
This is awesome writing. It's really sad but you are showing part of your big ole heart in this write.
I'm so sorry for your sadness. It wasn't your fault but I know you care.
Big huggs, blessings, prayer,
emy

Re: Rewind (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 17th January 2011 @ 03:54:34 PM AEST
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Hi Bin, I am terribly sorry to hear of this tragic incident. I cannot begin to imagine how badly you must feel but as Emy so rightly said, you were not responsible.

This is very touchcing and I hope writing about it helps you to heal. Miss you...
Miss Jenni

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