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Array ( [sid] => 16420 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => silver dream [time] => 2003-04-22 21:35:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My beloved friends
I want some of your attention
do I have to surrender
I’m her slave and feeling brave
I can’t bare the way she stare
and I can’t stay so far away from her
can I stare to the sun
she doesn’t realize that I’m a ring
in her finger like a king
from time to time , to her heart I sing
blasphemous or famous
some hearts are just genius
while others are suspicious
I know, love is unbearable
but my heart is capable
my beloved friends, are still able
to hear the story of my tears and my fables
cause I’m lonely and a recluse inside her
I still feel guilty for killing her
she hold me tight
and I couldn’t fight
while the demon inside still wants a bite.

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 22 [informant] => wazarov [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

silver dream

Contributed by wazarov on Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 09:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

My beloved friends
I want some of your attention
do I have to surrender
I’m her slave and feeling brave
I can’t bare the way she stare
and I can’t stay so far away from her
can I stare to the sun
she doesn’t realize that I’m a ring
in her finger like a king
from time to time , to her heart I sing
blasphemous or famous
some hearts are just genius
while others are suspicious
I know, love is unbearable
but my heart is capable
my beloved friends, are still able
to hear the story of my tears and my fables
cause I’m lonely and a recluse inside her
I still feel guilty for killing her
she hold me tight
and I couldn’t fight
while the demon inside still wants a bite.

Copyright Â© wazarov ... [ 2003-04-22 21:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: silver dream (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 11:18:18 PM AEST
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wow dean that was amazing... *sigh*

Lindsey

Re: silver dream (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 12:56:01 AM AEST
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well done
michelle

Re: silver dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 01:00:14 AM AEST
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Nice write, Dean...
Jenni

Re: silver dream (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 01:33:53 AM AEST
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a great write...moving...
hugs
kara

Re: silver dream (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 07:33:13 PM AEST
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beautiful!
Amy

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