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Array ( [sid] => 164199 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Until The End [time] => 2011-01-10 15:40:59 [hometext] => Please don't think I wrote this as a suicide note... It's not... I just wrote this as what I was feeling at the time [bodytext] => I sit in this world
Half asleep, Half awake
As time seems to fade
And my world starts to quake

I haven't slept a day
Since you left my life
I seem to forget
What is wrong, what is right

I can't even walk
And I'm just not the same
When you walked out the door
It drove me insane

I still have these dreams
And thoughts of when we grow old
The memories we'll have
And the stories we'll have told

But do you understand
It's hard to love another
Cause after loving you
I couldn't love another

Cause you're the one for me
I know it and I've felt it
And when you broke my heart
I just couldn't repair it

The pain was big and clear
There was no was no way to stop it
Its been a month since I
Have started to feel it

But now I know there's one way
To fix a broken heart
But it won't ever happen
So where should I start

I'll start with I still love you
And that will never change
No matter the distance
No matter how far away

So now we are done
So now we're just friends
But I will always love you
Until the very end [comments] => 3 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 22 [informant] => DoubleS [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Until The End

Contributed by DoubleS on Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 03:40:59 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I sit in this world
Half asleep, Half awake
As time seems to fade
And my world starts to quake

I haven't slept a day
Since you left my life
I seem to forget
What is wrong, what is right

I can't even walk
And I'm just not the same
When you walked out the door
It drove me insane

I still have these dreams
And thoughts of when we grow old
The memories we'll have
And the stories we'll have told

But do you understand
It's hard to love another
Cause after loving you
I couldn't love another

Cause you're the one for me
I know it and I've felt it
And when you broke my heart
I just couldn't repair it

The pain was big and clear
There was no was no way to stop it
Its been a month since I
Have started to feel it

But now I know there's one way
To fix a broken heart
But it won't ever happen
So where should I start

I'll start with I still love you
And that will never change
No matter the distance
No matter how far away

So now we are done
So now we're just friends
But I will always love you
Until the very end

Copyright © DoubleS ... [ 2011-01-10 15:40:59]
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Re: Until The End (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 04:59:21 PM AEST
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Very good writing.
blessings,
emy

Re: Until The End (User Rating: 1 )
by Breezy on Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 05:38:37 PM AEST
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Endings are almost always sad, even when it is the right thing.
But when it also feels wrong, it is almost unbearable.
There is tremendous sadness in this...

~ Breezy

Re: Until The End (User Rating: 1 )
by euphoema on Wednesday, 19th January 2011 @ 11:28:58 AM AEST
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very creative

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