Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 14:11:50 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 164169 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hypocrite [time] => 2011-01-08 20:32:46 [hometext] => [bodytext] => She views life
through the barrel of a gun
yet she claims she's a pacifist
She runs from them
the monotones
yet she secretly wishes they would accept her
She counts silently in her head
as she believes she is humble
more humble than you
She spends all her time
secretly consumed with
making the world believe she is not selfish
She doesn't want all the credit
she just doesn't want to share it with you
She honestly believes she is a good person
better than the rest of you
Oh, the lonely life of the hypocrite [comments] => 2 [counter] => 124 [topic] => 21 [informant] => wendy0620 [notes] => Please leave at least three comments for every poem you post. Thank-you. ~ Moderator_18 Jan 9, 2011 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Hypocrite

Contributed by wendy0620 on Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 08:32:46 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

She views life
through the barrel of a gun
yet she claims she's a pacifist
She runs from them
the monotones
yet she secretly wishes they would accept her
She counts silently in her head
as she believes she is humble
more humble than you
She spends all her time
secretly consumed with
making the world believe she is not selfish
She doesn't want all the credit
she just doesn't want to share it with you
She honestly believes she is a good person
better than the rest of you
Oh, the lonely life of the hypocrite

Copyright © wendy0620 ... [ 2011-01-08 20:32:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Hypocrite (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 02:15:10 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I imagine the gun is metaphoric. Though as for the things she does, I wonder what she thinks she does that makes her so special...

Re: Hypocrite (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 11:03:54 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

WELL WRITENAND SAD AT THE SAME TIME.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com