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Array ( [sid] => 164160 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => YOU SHO??? [time] => 2011-01-08 09:27:53 [hometext] => stright from the pen [bodytext] => You sho don't look like
a boy to me.
Know you're alive little boy
ouiiiiieeeeeeiii.
Tell me what luv is,
wonna see.
Are you sho you think
you luv me?

How will we ever know?
Gonna get cold tonight,
Even might even snow.
repeat..

No matter what comes along
Time is motionless with out you.
You're running free
in the sunshine.
Come heat the world
Round here, see?

Vibrations tremble inside
Whoop ei.
Was you the one God made? So
We could hold each other up.
Is this what, creations laid?

Gotta always be aware
of heaven
Paved with angels every where.
To keep luv strong, free.
Rolling on here and over there. [comments] => 11 [counter] => 433 [topic] => 46 [informant] => emystar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => didactic )

YOU SHO???

Contributed by emystar on Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 09:27:53 AM in AEST
Topic: didactic

You sho don't look like
a boy to me.
Know you're alive little boy
ouiiiiieeeeeeiii.
Tell me what luv is,
wonna see.
Are you sho you think
you luv me?

How will we ever know?
Gonna get cold tonight,
Even might even snow.
repeat..

No matter what comes along
Time is motionless with out you.
You're running free
in the sunshine.
Come heat the world
Round here, see?

Vibrations tremble inside
Whoop ei.
Was you the one God made? So
We could hold each other up.
Is this what, creations laid?

Gotta always be aware
of heaven
Paved with angels every where.
To keep luv strong, free.
Rolling on here and over there.

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2011-01-08 09:27:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: YOU SHO??? (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 02:55:15 AM AEST
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I don't quite get it, but the way you spell some of the words out, and with what you wrote as a description I was expecting some sort of gangster thing, straight out of the 'pen'itentiary.

Re: YOU SHO??? (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 11:08:11 AM AEST
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AFTER ALL THESE YEARS YOU HAVEN'T LOS A THING.WELL DONE MY FRIEND.

Re: YOU SHO??? (User Rating: 1 )
by Dirkj on Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 11:49:56 PM AEST
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LOVE IT

Re: YOU SHO??? (User Rating: 1 )
by Breezy on Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 06:36:39 PM AEST
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Hey emy :)

Beautiful last stanza. As always, your work is filled
with much emotion. Lovely to read.

~ Breezy
♥

Re: YOU SHO??? (User Rating: 1 )
by Banjosandwitch on Tuesday, 8th February 2011 @ 07:51:44 AM AEST
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shizzle forizzle nice

Re: YOU SHO??? (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 18th March 2011 @ 03:30:49 PM AEST
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I could picture you sitting by the fire just reciting this one as if you were chatting to friends.
Quirky and interesting.

Steve

Re: YOU SHO??? (User Rating: 1 )
by UNORTHODOX on Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 11:41:28 PM AEST
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What I loved most about this piece,
was it's unpolished quality
it was witty,clever, and brought a smile to my face
it's interesting to think how our minds think
before we start thinking for it
well done ,a breath of fresh air

-UNORTHODOX

Re: YOU SHO??? (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Saturday, 16th April 2011 @ 09:12:02 AM AEST
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You sho you ain't an angel
cause
I'm sho you are......yes.

Re: YOU SHO??? (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 11:00:12 AM AEST
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The last commentor got it right.
Me too - am shoo we deal with an angel here. A very delightful and unique type of angerl, that can not but delight the earthy individual comforted by the angel's warmth
love and faithfulness. woopie !
Enjoyed greatly
Blessed and joyous Easter! sweet Emystar angel
Elizabeth

Re: YOU SHO??? (User Rating: 1 )
by Ramfire on Monday, 13th June 2011 @ 08:31:57 PM AEST
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Gotta go with the vibrations. They're right every time.

Re: YOU SHO??? (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Monday, 4th July 2011 @ 11:18:05 PM AEST
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Very unusual, and witty poem. I like it.

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