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for N ...

~ * ~

Your smile trembles in cautious ambivalence
desperate to be known..
Eyes that laugh, dance upon me like rays on water
with a sparkle, rare in its mastery

Freedom steals a kiss from enchantment
embracing a forgotten song

Moments melt together in perfect collision
as firefly light glows in embers
warm enough to hold the night ~

~ * ~

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Inspired

Contributed by Breezy on Friday, 7th January 2011 @ 04:03:11 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

for N ...

~ * ~

Your smile trembles in cautious ambivalence
desperate to be known..
Eyes that laugh, dance upon me like rays on water
with a sparkle, rare in its mastery

Freedom steals a kiss from enchantment
embracing a forgotten song

Moments melt together in perfect collision
as firefly light glows in embers
warm enough to hold the night ~

~ * ~

Copyright © Breezy ... [ 2011-01-07 16:03:11]
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Re: Inspired (User Rating: 1 )
by Voyager on Friday, 7th January 2011 @ 08:35:53 PM AEST
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I like the abstract feel you've given to the poem...

"Moments melt together in perfect collision"

This is a greAT line. beaUtifully described and well written.

Re: Inspired (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 7th January 2011 @ 10:35:40 PM AEST
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Don't know what to say that I haven't already said hundreds of times before (probably literally). Have always loved your poems and always will.

Admittedly, I don't really understand it but I don't always care about that. It takes my mind on a ride and I like to go for rides; metaphorically and for real.

Thank you.

Timmy
cool dude

cool dude

Re: Inspired (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 03:44:52 AM AEST
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It's so nice to see this awesome write from you, my friend.
Blessings,
emy

Re: Inspired (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 11:12:31 AM AEST
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ONLY TURE LOVE COULD EXPRESS WORD SO TRUE,STRAIGHT FROM THE HEART.I LIKE THIS POEM VERY MUCH.

Re: Inspired (User Rating: 1 )
by EternitysLyre on Tuesday, 11th January 2011 @ 04:51:45 AM AEST
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These days I go searching for what it is that divides the poet from the prosaic, because all I can tell is that some writing feels emotional, breathless, while others sound monotone and gray.

One line in and I could already hear you pouring yourself onto the page. This brought a smile to my day, and I thank you.

~EL

Re: Inspired (User Rating: 1 )
by Anoo on Wednesday, 19th January 2011 @ 08:50:47 AM AEST
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'Eyes that laugh, dance upon me like rays on water'
Poetry that flows like a stream. I love the combination of words and similies you've used. It's the kind of poem I would like to read over and over again and each time a different sense added.

Re: Inspired (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 12:13:20 PM AEST
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Hi Breezy,

Poetry is the music and the pulse of sensibility.
This short beautiful piece confirms it.

Tommy

Re: Inspired (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 22nd March 2014 @ 01:21:49 PM AEST
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Everything about this inspires me, even your author comment. Your poetic melody touches down and dances softly with each line, and each carefully chosen word. Roxie I love this. You have such a gift with words and expressing all things beautiful.

People like YOU inspire ME. True story, and I will keep re-visiting your page for those very reasons.

~Scorp

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