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Winter
Contributed by
nrazak1
on
Tuesday, 4th January 2011 @ 07:23:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Snow gently falling to the ground.
A beautiful sight all around.
Children laughing and playing with glee.
It's like a blanket of white thrown over the sea.
Catching snowflakes with warm gloves.
Looking at the intricate designs falling from above.
Building a fort and having snowball fights.
Drinking hot chocolate and enjoying the sights.
Hugging each other under the cover.
Kissing with so much passion yet to be discovered.
Cuddling at night by the fire place.
Tightly interlocked with no breathing space.
Candies, cookies and cinnamon rolls.
Trays of pies and fudge filled bowls.
Drinking apple cider and eating cake.
Leaving room for the sweet potato pie I've yet to take.
I hope you see why winter is so great.
I love it so much not even an ounce of hate.
Winter is lovely like a piece of art.
That's why it will always rule over my heart.
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nrazak1
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Re: Winter
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dirkj on
Wednesday, 5th January 2011 @ 04:20:20 AM AEST (User
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hi nrazak, although i can't relate to your poem i still like it, very well written, i am from South Africa and we very seldom see snow and our winters are very mild...but nicely done congrats |
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Re: Winter
(User Rating: 1 ) by northernlights on
Friday, 7th January 2011 @ 05:39:20 AM AEST (User
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A real winter warmer a heart that so obviously loves this time of year for some wonderful reasons,an uplifting write for all who only see the harshness of winter.......catching snowflakes with warm gloves...... a lovely line and my favourite in this piece |
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Re: Winter
(User Rating: 1 ) by StacyLynnG on
Monday, 14th February 2011 @ 12:47:05 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful poem, gave me the warm and fuzzies!
Can you write one for spring now please haha! |
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