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Broken Mind Demons
Contributed by
brianimal
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Tuesday, 4th January 2011 @ 04:57:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The shrink that shrunk your broken mind were why your Demons turned so unkind
He provided the pills that paid his bills, safely meant, to get through rough times.
Something wrong.
Could not ignore
Did not take long
Worse than before.
Poison, razor, pistol, and noose,
took away the despair you wished to loose.
Empty casing with your name,
you knew this was not the roulette game.
The bleeding cuts dried on your arms,
your sadness and rage just gone too far.
Fourty pills...an extreme amount,
yet you took them all in and went down for the count.
Made it thru
Nightmares come true
Pain is gone
So are you
Leaving ME shrunk....
with your broken mind Demons.
Copyright ©
brianimal
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2011-01-04 04:57:36]
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Re: Broken Mind Demons
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by Voyager on
Tuesday, 4th January 2011 @ 05:37:05 AM AEST
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| dark, descriptive, sad, angry, reflective...you captured emotions well espeically in the last few lines |
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Re: Broken Mind Demons
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by CrimsonTears on
Wednesday, 5th January 2011 @ 08:21:53 PM AEST
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very well done! very sad but also very beautifully written!
Lots of love
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