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Array ( [sid] => 164027 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Death of Love [time] => 2010-12-31 06:03:22 [hometext] => Sometimes when you stop loving someone... you can hear your lost love screaming, and begging not to be swallowed by the abyss. [bodytext] => Hear the screams, they do not stop,
Reach out of the pain, stop feeling so lost,

Open the fear and rip up remorse,
kill all the tears and stay the course,

Drown in the sorrow, corruption… then madness,
Destroyer of love, you revel in sadness,

A pinch, a bite, a slap, a sting,
You demolish the past, and the future it brings,

This hollow abyss, deep in my soul,
Has only one purpose… only one goal,

The defeat of love, so peaceful and true.
I’m sorry my love… it’s swallowing you.
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The Death of Love

Contributed by deusdeira on Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 06:03:22 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Hear the screams, they do not stop,
Reach out of the pain, stop feeling so lost,

Open the fear and rip up remorse,
kill all the tears and stay the course,

Drown in the sorrow, corruption… then madness,
Destroyer of love, you revel in sadness,

A pinch, a bite, a slap, a sting,
You demolish the past, and the future it brings,

This hollow abyss, deep in my soul,
Has only one purpose… only one goal,

The defeat of love, so peaceful and true.
I’m sorry my love… it’s swallowing you.

Copyright Â© deusdeira ... [ 2010-12-31 06:03:22]
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Re: The Death of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Jussy74 on Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 07:54:08 AM AEST
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Very strong and powerful words indeed!

Re: The Death of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Voyager on Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 06:34:46 PM AEST
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it has a great flow to it and a sense of power.

Re: The Death of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Brianimal on Saturday, 1st January 2011 @ 07:23:44 AM AEST
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this was a good read! Thanks for sharing.

Re: The Death of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by bwright824 on Sunday, 27th March 2011 @ 10:45:18 AM AEST
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I read this and got the chills, 2 thumbs up from me!

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