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Array ( [sid] => 164004 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Message For the Soon To Be Departed [time] => 2010-12-30 15:23:33 [hometext] => When trust is shattered and love is scorned, the only thing left to do is say goodbye. [bodytext] => Wrapp'd in sweet warmth I send you off to find yourself
Kiss'd on the forehead, I know you won't cry
I would be sad if you hadn't cursed our ground
I would be sad if I still craved your life

Check through your pockets to feel tickets smooth as ice
Go through your bag for your clean underwear
I sit and smile, awaiting my sweet alone
I sit and smile, a plain, hidden dare

You step aside, a lingering catch clear in your eyes
You turn to leave, still begging to stay
I wouldn't care to see your evident regret
I wouldn't care for I want you away [comments] => 3 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 52 [informant] => Song_of_Sarah [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

A Message For the Soon To Be Departed

Contributed by Song_of_Sarah on Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 03:23:33 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Wrapp'd in sweet warmth I send you off to find yourself
Kiss'd on the forehead, I know you won't cry
I would be sad if you hadn't cursed our ground
I would be sad if I still craved your life

Check through your pockets to feel tickets smooth as ice
Go through your bag for your clean underwear
I sit and smile, awaiting my sweet alone
I sit and smile, a plain, hidden dare

You step aside, a lingering catch clear in your eyes
You turn to leave, still begging to stay
I wouldn't care to see your evident regret
I wouldn't care for I want you away

Copyright © Song_of_Sarah ... [ 2010-12-30 15:23:33]
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Re: A Message For the Soon To Be Departed (User Rating: 1 )
by Aworldofemotions on Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 08:04:53 PM AEST
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I LOVE YOUR MESSAGE AND THE FORMAT YOU CHOSE A,B,C,B ...ETC

Re: A Message For the Soon To Be Departed (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 04:44:38 PM AEST
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the perfect poetic frame for dishonest partners to wilful adolescents. My favourite phrases 'my sweet alone'and that 'plain, hidden dare'will stay with me. Well captured.

Spike

Re: A Message For the Soon To Be Departed (User Rating: 1 )
by Brianimal on Saturday, 1st January 2011 @ 07:52:36 AM AEST
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The picture. The expressions of faces described to perfection. The emotion...or should I say almost lack-there-of is intense. Good one!!!!

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