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Array ( [sid] => 163997 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => His all consuming power. [time] => 2010-12-30 04:17:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => As the devils seed,
Takes hold of me,
And spawns another monster,
I storm about,
Scream and shout,
And try to vent my anger,
So dishes break,
Windows quake,
And all around just cower,
I rant and rave,
And cannot stave,
His all consuming power.

Yet in time,
I realign,
This feeling now so sour,
Don't know how,
Don't go there now,
Just sit around and glower,
I see then,
That demon,
I left to seed and flower,
Amongst the gloom,
In your room,
In your ivory tower. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 243 [topic] => 6 [informant] => huwbeauty [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

His all consuming power.

Contributed by huwbeauty on Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 04:17:32 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

As the devils seed,
Takes hold of me,
And spawns another monster,
I storm about,
Scream and shout,
And try to vent my anger,
So dishes break,
Windows quake,
And all around just cower,
I rant and rave,
And cannot stave,
His all consuming power.

Yet in time,
I realign,
This feeling now so sour,
Don't know how,
Don't go there now,
Just sit around and glower,
I see then,
That demon,
I left to seed and flower,
Amongst the gloom,
In your room,
In your ivory tower.

Copyright © huwbeauty ... [ 2010-12-30 04:17:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: His all consuming power. (User Rating: 1 )
by Voyager on Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 05:26:57 AM AEST
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Don't know what to make of it but it was nice! :D......like the sort of pulsating rhythm it had....good job!

Re: His all consuming power. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 09:33:18 AM AEST
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Very interesting, thought provoking.
Blessings,
emy

Re: His all consuming power. (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 01:02:54 PM AEST
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Most people who know me here, know I leave the rhyming alone. Each to their own. :) But...this one was catchy & I almost like it! LOL! (no haters please) This was the POP for me.

'That demon,
I left to seed and flower,
Amongst the gloom,
In your room,
In your ivory tower.'

ming

Re: His all consuming power. (User Rating: 1 )
by Rx1471 on Friday, 7th January 2011 @ 05:53:24 AM AEST
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Strangely intriguing, something about this poem both captivated and slightly confused me.

Excellent work, though towards the end I lost track of the main idea.

Re: His all consuming power. (User Rating: 1 )
by JJAA_91 on Sunday, 16th January 2011 @ 03:13:30 PM AEST
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the very obvious steady beat that goes with this poem makes it very catchy, and i like that. i feel it starts to digress a bit towards the end but i think i know what your trying to get at. it was a captivating read that was very thought provoking, well done x

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